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[D]

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lead and backing vocals ?D
lead and rhythm guitars D
bass ?D
drums D
keyboard sound effect synth D

i write and play every instrument

[Miz]

Pretty good dude: ok:
I'd lose the keyboard though, and have a guitar playing the same thing instead or something, because, to me, it sounded kinda crappy (no offense of course ).

I like it anyway, very evil.

[EM]

Sounds like Alice Cooper...

-EM

[Butch Français]

Pretty good dude: ok:
I'd lose the keyboard though, and have a guitar playing the same thing instead or something, because, to me, it sounded kinda crappy (no offense of course ).

I like it anyway, very evil.

exacly what I was thinking

I would do the whole thing a little faster, and sing louder/harder, lose the keyboard/synth thing, add more guitar and bass(I have crappy computer-speakers here so it might just be that I don't hear the bass properly!)

but the changes I would make would probably change the shape of the song so much it might be completely different to what you wanna do. it's got potential, and it's cool that you play everything yourself.
Im gonna do the same thing as soon as I get a hold of enough equipment!

cheers mate

[D]

thanks guys for listening and the opinions

that is a very rough demo of that song

i havent mixed and mastered it properly yet, that was also a first take vocal, so im gonna dive in and pump the guitars up a little louder, drop the synth effect lower in them mix pump the bass up a tad

that was just to show an idea of what some of my stuff sounds like

i hope u guys liked it, i have lots of songs still to be put up

kiedis when u get something down let me hear it

i enjoy hearing people's music

once again thanks for the suggestions and the feedback!

D

[D]

i just added a nother new song called "one foot in the grave"

this is a one take vocal im off key on one word in the first verse, and i mumble the opening line of the second verse, i fucked it up but it was just one take

tell me what u think

[loretian]

D, I think they're both very impressive.  Very nice work, I really like "One Foot in the Grave" the most.  Your voice is unique (in a good way) as well.

[Butch Français]

thanks guys for listening and the opinions

that is a very rough demo of that song

i havent mixed and mastered it properly yet, that was also a first take vocal, so im gonna dive in and pump the guitars up a little louder, drop the synth effect lower in them mix pump the bass up a tad

that was just to show an idea of what some of my stuff sounds like

i hope u guys liked it, i have lots of songs still to be put up

kiedis when u get something down let me hear it

i enjoy hearing people's music

once again thanks for the suggestions and the feedback!

D

all sounds good man!

it might take a while before I get something down on my own, busy playing drums and gitar(not at the same time! ) in projects these days

I don't have the time to download your other song right now, I'll let you know when Ive heard it!

[D]

D, I think they're both very impressive.  Very nice work, I really like "One Foot in the Grave" the most.  Your voice is unique (in a good way) as well.

thanks alot loretian! that means alot to me man that u like it!

i fully expected that id get ripped a new asshole and ive hesitated for months now on letting people hear it
i was sorta bout to give up and i used this as a last ditch effort to find out if i have what it takes or not

u guys have feeled me with tons of confidence and guys i want to hear your music

i bet all of u are talented as hell, so loretian get some stuff down dude and make u a folder and let us hear it

kiedis i got all the time in the world, but i want to hear some stuff man

conny thanks man for all the pep talks and advice

everyone go check out conny's stuff if u havent, his voice and songs are amazing

well guys ill let u all know when im able to put up some other stuff

my scsi cable that goes to my cd burner that connects to my recording studio is messed up and as soon as i get another one ill let u guys hear some more stuff

thanks again guys! i appreciate it immensley!

[loretian]

i fully expected that id get ripped a new asshole and ive hesitated for months now on letting people hear it
i was sorta bout to give up and i used this as a last ditch effort to find out if i have what it takes or not

Really?  That surprises me ... you sound like an accomplished musician - definitely keep at it man, I can't wait to hear more of your songs.

i bet all of u are talented as hell, so loretian get some stuff down dude and make u a folder and let us hear it

One day I will... I've got a bunch of songs recorded, and lyrics for them, but I can't sing at all, so there's no vocals.  I'm either going to force myself to learn to sing or get one of my buddies to sing them for me.

everyone go check out conny's stuff if u havent, his voice and songs are amazing

Yeah, I discovered conny's music a few months ago, it's really good.  He also has a cool One in a Million cover for those who haven't checked it out yet.

Rock on!  

[D]

man learn to sing
hell who knows u may be able to sing now

voices are weird, u know some think certain people can sing, some might think they suck,

i have old songs i recorded 5 years ago and i couldnt carry a tune in a bucket

but i kept singing along with my favorite artists and practicing and im ok at itnow

yeah ive been playin guitar for 8 years, and ive been writing songs for bout 7 years, its hit and miss, im still recording

those 2 songs online are my filler shit to be honest

i have 3 songs i consider to be my *to stillf rom axl* "big guns"
ill have those up in a couple months im still working on them

thanks again loretian for listening and get to work singing or finding a vocalist
i wanna hear!

[journey]

D, whenever I try to open your songs my Rio Port audio manager pops up, instead of your songs.  What am I doing wrong?

[Izzy]

Impressive, i like them both, i think your vocals are very good as is the guitar work. There's real potential shown here.

[D]

D, whenever I try to open your songs my Rio Port audio manager pops up, instead of your songs.  What am I doing wrong?

hmmmmm right click on the song and open in new window

thats one way i know or just download em

if all else fails add me to msn messenger or yahoo messenger and i can send em like that

try to listen i want your feedback!

[D]

by request ill type the lyrics

Welcome to Reality

sit in my room
nothin for me to do
writin down whats on my mind
i just feel so behind

down an alley behind the store
rats are crawlin on the floor
checkered pavement blue and green
fill the spaces in between

welcome to reality,reality made me welcome to reality reality just made me

guitar solo

purple sun and yellow sky
the world just flashed b4 my eyes
children drown in green koolaide
black velvet soaked in lemonade
freezie pops go down the drain
they crash and burn like aeroplanes
the sun dont shine, the stars dont beam
is this real or is it just a dream?

welcome to reality, reality made me welcome to reality reality just made me

guitar solo

[D]

One Foot In the grave

when people ask me about it i lie
even to myself i always deny
cause i dont wanna face the fact that u dont love me

im just so lonely tonight
i wish that i could hold u tight
so i can feel u breathe

i try to hold on, i try to go on but i know that youre not comin back

chorus

and i know that ive made mistakes
and i know that im to blame
know that my life will never be the same
nowhere to run or to escape cause our love's to gone to save and without u babe, i got one foot in the grave

when a car like yours drives by
my heart falls to my knees everytime
and i wonder if yours ever does the same

thats when the tears come to my eyes
and i begin to realize that ill never be ok

i swear that id rather cry over you
then to find somebody knew
cause your in my dreams everything i do

repeat chorus

im just so lonely tonight
i wish that i could hold u tight
so i.................. can feel u breathe......

[Captain P?l]

ihavent heard the song yet... i will download it tonight.... god i hate to download shit... so slow! (56K)

but the lyrics are really cool, dude!  

[Captain P?l]

cool! i heard wlcome to reality yesterday! really intresting, not quite my style, but cool!  

gonna download One Foot in The Grave tonight  

[loretian]

So, D, when are we gonna get to hear the big guns?  You and Axl keep holding out on us!      Again, I really like One Foot in the Grave.  All your playing is excellent, you're skilled at all the instruments, it's pretty awesome!

[Cornell]

Great job, D!    I usually don't expect to like anything that I hear on a board but I was pleasantly surprised with yours.  I wanna hear more!  

Oh, and Happy Birthday! [birthday]