Me singing ONE IN A MILLION by Guns N' Roses - MySpace link - feedback?

[EstrangedReality]

Hey guys,

Long time no "see." (Or whatever.)

I've been trying to improve my singing and have just uploaded a clip of me singing "One in a Million" by GN'R to MySpace. The end is bad but I think the middle section is pretty good and I was looking for feedback!

Here's the link: http://myspace.com/russianroulette2006

If you prefer YouTube: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=uhLRAJ0lYog

Thanks for anything you have to offer.

Later!

[EFISH]

Brilliant. You should try out for American Idol and sing Silkworms! 

[CheapJon]

I love your singing dude, the whistle in the beginning kinda sucked to be honest but the rest was kick ass

[D]

THis sounds much better than the others cause u dont seem to be trying so hard to do the rasp.

When u sing it naturally and as yourself instead of trying to sound like Axl, it is a lot better.