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Re: Share Poems Lyrics and Songs you wrote here.
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C G
Me, I'm doing well
A F
And I thought about you the other day now
And... and I still
Try to figure out just what I
Did so wrong or what you did so right
The other night I waited by the phone (by the phone)
And when I called
Your sister said you weren't home
You were out with friends
Well to me-e that's the end
That's the end
Chorus:
I went down to the local bar
I sat and wondered where you are
I ran my fingers thru my hair
And I don't wanna go back there
2x
So now we're on our own
And I think of how the
two of us have grown
Your on the men's room hall of fame
Now another guy calls your name
We see each other and we just walk by
And I'm afraid to just say hi....
to just say hi
Chorus:
I went down to the local bar
I sat and wondered where you are
I ran my fingers thru my hair
And I don't wanna go back there
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4 chords, fast, blink 182 style (C,G,A,F)
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Re: Share Poems Lyrics and Songs you wrote here.
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Reaching Out
you know I have noone to talk to
about what has all fallen down
I find it hard to deal with at times
like an emotional coaster
that I can't seem to get off
The last thing I want is to see you mad
and the first thing I think of saying is
sorry for all the years of mishap and pain
I don't like these dark clouds over my head
Somedays are better than others
and other days don't even count
So often the words are misunderstood
and sometimes their just wrong
I don't want to bring you down
I would like to hold you up
like a woman should
not to bring you grief
with all that has been said and done
I would like to move on
I know our paths will cross again someday
and I hope to have a chance to make amends
because I know I am not always right
but most of all because I am tired of being alone
Somedays are better than others
and often days don't count at all
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Re: Share Poems Lyrics and Songs you wrote here.
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October 01, 2006, 11:15:51 PM »
SORROWS REINCARNATION
Sorrow
Today you are my imprint
allowing me to ask.....
Dont I deserve good?
Didnt Eve?
All men dream they are Adam
ruined by Eve...but its not true
History always Demonizes
Future always plots
Moment is arrogant claiming to be the only truth
Most Pleiadians dispute such self-centered fixations
It could be said.....
Eve was Jesus on the cross
persecuted by Adam and the sell outs
she paid big time for the sins of sensualists
men are flesh junkies addicted to ego flicks
Eve recycled as Hitler....
resentful and bitter holding onto the great grudge
perhaps she was a secret lesbian
trying to burn away her stubborn desires
of Adam and his mighty ribs
Eve tried to make amends as Buddha
she vowed to transform the war of duality
breathing and chanting....gasping
until she detached and fainted out of the scene
an although she was a dead beat dad to Adam
it was disguised as enlightenment
she died not in moderation at all
but Fat with all the guilt she suppressed
Next she was Ghandi
somewhat Catholic in her masochism
an exhibitionist for domestic violence
beaten down by Adam
his army of repressed shivas
forced her into yes
there marriage was syndicated
Eve starved for liberation...or a divorce
still still struggled with weight issues
adam was fed up ( but not fat)
he shot his rib into her passive pretending
killing her illusion of control
Even Now they are playing it out
moment is our only evidence
Eve is a computer numb in her millenium
and Adam...poor voyeour of visions
he is reduced to a sex feign surfing the net
typing in a search for pleasure pleasure
so desperate for love to touch him
so seduced by his own mind
he has traded all his ribs in
to taste the good fruits of Eve
but she is almost gone
absent ingested ejected
her core is empty she will end without imprint
and so goes the synthetic scheme
Adam and Eve
good and evil
just artifical knowledge
a story with no substance
when Eve craves good deserved
Adam only promotes sorrows reincarnation
and she signs off with a sweet smile
to end Gods torment.....
By Sisterofyu.....keekee
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Re: Share Poems Lyrics and Songs you wrote here.
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Quote from: sisterofyu on October 01, 2006, 11:15:51 PM
SORROWS REINCARNATION
Sorrow
Today you are my imprint
allowing me to ask.....
Dont I deserve good?
Didnt Eve?
All men dream they are Adam
ruined by Eve...but its not true
History always Demonizes
Future always plots
Moment is arrogant claiming to be the only truth
Most Pleiadians dispute such self-centered fixations
It could be said.....
Eve was Jesus on the cross
persecuted by Adam and the sell outs
she paid big time for the sins of sensualists
men are flesh junkies addicted to ego flicks
Eve recycled as Hitler....
resentful and bitter holding onto the great grudge
perhaps she was a secret lesbian
trying to burn away her stubborn desires
of Adam and his mighty ribs
Eve tried to make amends as Buddha
she vowed to transform the war of duality
breathing and chanting....gasping
until she detached and fainted out of the scene
an although she was a dead beat dad to Adam
it was disguised as enlightenment
she died not in moderation at all
but Fat with all the guilt she suppressed
Next she was Ghandi
somewhat Catholic in her masochism
an exhibitionist for domestic violence
beaten down by Adam
his army of repressed shivas
forced her into yes
there marriage was syndicated
Eve starved for liberation...or a divorce
still still struggled with weight issues
adam was fed up ( but not fat)
he shot his rib into her passive pretending
killing her illusion of control
Even Now they are playing it out
moment is our only evidence
Eve is a computer numb in her millenium
and Adam...poor voyeour of visions
he is reduced to a sex feign surfing the net
typing in a search for pleasure pleasure
so desperate for love to touch him
so seduced by his own mind
he has traded all his ribs in
to taste the good fruits of Eve
but she is almost gone
absent ingested ejected
her core is empty she will end without imprint
and so goes the synthetic scheme
Adam and Eve
good and evil
just artifical knowledge
a story with no substance
when Eve craves good deserved
Adam only promotes sorrows reincarnation
and she signs off with a sweet smile
to end Gods torment.....
By Sisterofyu.....keekee
That's incredible - very intelligent and thought-provoking.
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Re: Share Poems Lyrics and Songs you wrote here.
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October 01, 2006, 11:47:19 PM »
Quote from: journey on October 01, 2006, 11:28:25 PM
Quote from: sisterofyu on October 01, 2006, 11:15:51 PM
SORROWS REINCARNATION
Sorrow
Today you are my imprint
allowing me to ask.....
Dont I deserve good?
Didnt Eve?
All men dream they are Adam
ruined by Eve...but its not true
History always Demonizes
Future always plots
Moment is arrogant claiming to be the only truth
Most Pleiadians dispute such self-centered fixations
It could be said.....
Eve was Jesus on the cross
persecuted by Adam and the sell outs
she paid big time for the sins of sensualists
men are flesh junkies addicted to ego flicks
Eve recycled as Hitler....
resentful and bitter holding onto the great grudge
perhaps she was a secret lesbian
trying to burn away her stubborn desires
of Adam and his mighty ribs
Eve tried to make amends as Buddha
she vowed to transform the war of duality
breathing and chanting....gasping
until she detached and fainted out of the scene
an although she was a dead beat dad to Adam
it was disguised as enlightenment
she died not in moderation at all
but Fat with all the guilt she suppressed
Next she was Ghandi
somewhat Catholic in her masochism
an exhibitionist for domestic violence
beaten down by Adam
his army of repressed shivas
forced her into yes
there marriage was syndicated
Eve starved for liberation...or a divorce
still still struggled with weight issues
adam was fed up ( but not fat)
he shot his rib into her passive pretending
killing her illusion of control
Even Now they are playing it out
moment is our only evidence
Eve is a computer numb in her millenium
and Adam...poor voyeour of visions
he is reduced to a sex feign surfing the net
typing in a search for pleasure pleasure
so desperate for love to touch him
so seduced by his own mind
he has traded all his ribs in
to taste the good fruits of Eve
but she is almost gone
absent ingested ejected
her core is empty she will end without imprint
and so goes the synthetic scheme
Adam and Eve
good and evil
just artifical knowledge
a story with no substance
when Eve craves good deserved
Adam only promotes sorrows reincarnation
and she signs off with a sweet smile
to end Gods torment.....
By Sisterofyu.....keekee
That's incredible - very intelligent and thought-provoking.
Thank you Flower?
your the sweetest Girl in the world?
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Here is one I wrote about 5 years ago...not too many people have seen this....it has no title....
Innocent Pleasures, Beautiful Feathers
My Power Breathes Just As She Stands
Balancing Color, My Dream Or Anothers
Unknowingly Trapped In Her Hands
Many Awaken, Shadows Are Taken
But We've Never Been So Alive
Oh Such An Ocean, I Feel Her Motion
Let's Follow Her Back Into Time
(chorus)
My New Day, And She Knows The Way
In Between Red And Blue I Will Say
I'd Like Us To Stay This Way
Cover The Head Full Of Hurt Till'
A Numbing Vibe Finds The Circle
A Permanent Stay, As Two Of Us Lay
Under The Smiling Gray, Someday
Spinning Ring Made Of Water
In She Swims, Someone Taught Her
Around The Corner, The Place That Fought Her
Touching Cheeks Will Claim The Water
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Quote from: Skinflick on October 03, 2006, 12:44:01 PM
Here is one I wrote about 5 years ago...not too many people have seen this....it has no title....
Innocent Pleasures, Beautiful Feathers
My Power Breathes Just As She Stands
Balancing Color, My Dream Or Anothers
Unknowingly Trapped In Her Hands
Many Awaken, Shadows Are Taken
But We've Never Been So Alive
Oh Such An Ocean, I Feel Her Motion
Let's Follow Her Back Into Time
(chorus)
My New Day, And She Knows The Way
In Between Red And Blue I Will Say
I'd Like Us To Stay This Way
Cover The Head Full Of Hurt Till'
A Numbing Vibe Finds The Circle
A Permanent Stay, As Two Of Us Lay
Under The Smiling Gray, Someday
Spinning Ring Made Of Water
In She Swims, Someone Taught Her
Around The Corner, The Place That Fought Her
Touching Cheeks Will Claim The Water
-Skinflick
It has beautiful imagery. Eloquently written too.
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been in a band a few months now wit a few friends from school.... and never ever written anything before..... now i have like 3 or 4 lines..... it eant good but you no.... i guess i have to start somewhere..
i wont be insulted... honest openions, pointers, advice would really be appreciated.... no title either.... here it is...!!
Cuz I in time, will see the lights are fading
But you remind, me of the times worth saving
And when I sometimes, ask myself why were ending
It dont make sence, there will be no more changing, no more changing.
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I am man, made of vanilla sauce
Fat as few, a giant compared to Santa Claus
I do my thing, as the sirens ring
with in my head i begin too sing
I can sing better than you
you cant sing better than me
possibly you can write better lyrics
but thats something that can be taken care of
what about i cut your fingers off
and than i slap you until you starts too cough
yes i know this text i shittier, pittyer
even includes Adolf Hitt-i-lier
so i stop.
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haha Rubber Bullets, loved that, i so wanna do a cover of that song, even though i don't now your melody i could hear it in my head. that's how great it was
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This one is kind of emo, or just plain fucked up, but I was bored and decided to write my first song.
Body Bag
I know...
It's cliched.
But let's face it!
(Progressive slides up fretboards with heavy bass in the background)
Gettin' old is a drag
And it's worse when your livin' out your years
With a worn out, screaming hag
Sometimes she drives me crazy
Some times I'm on the verge of tears
But oh the price I'd pay
To see her in a body bag
Body bag
Oh I'd love to see her in a...
Body bag
Fucking hag!
She should die and be put in a body bag
(Guitar solo, followed by drum fill)
Now I know this sounds angry
I know it can be absurd
But when she pisses me off
Her life'll be become a giant fucking turd
(Hey, not much rhymes with absurd!)
She doesn't even deserve a coffin
Not even a decent funeral
'Cause she used to gossip so often
Lies, drugs, rumors and scandals
Oh how she loved that shit
You couldn't imagine the things she would do
Just for another hit
Now this song is ending
I'd say,
It wasn't bad
But if you find your self inspired by this
The cops'll have me nabbed
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Wow the people who posted on here are rele gd. I almost didn't put this cz I'm completely upstaged but o well lol. It's a song I wrote about a week ago after losing my closest mate and losin 3 of my other closest m8s cz of it. it's called "Where I Wanna Be". For some reason in my head i imagine the verses being sung to the tune of the verses in "Dead Horse" and the choruses to the tune of "Freak On a Leash" lol. Say what you want bout it I don't really care lol.
Well here we go:
Verse 1:
You raise me high in the sky
Then throw me down into the ocean
I know you're pissed off but why all this commossion?
You send me up into heaven
Then drag me back down to hell
I know you want it to, but this ain't goin well.
Pre-Chorus:
What do you want...from me?
I'm tired of feeling like a...Zombie
When all I want now is to...BE FREE!
Chorus:
All the angels turn their backs on me
They're all where I wanna be
Maybe in time you will see
All the shit that you've cause me
All the angels turn their backs on me
They're all where I wanna be
Now I've got reason to believe
You've trapped me here and I can't leave
Verse 2:
One minute it's raining
The next it's sunny whether
Make up your mind, will it be scale or feather?
Sometimes I've got a fire
Sometimes I've got a candle
Why is all this shit so hard to fuckin' handle?
{Prechorus}
{Chorus}
{Guitar Solo}
Bridge:
'Cause of all this I'm flyin' like a stone
I'm just lying here scared and alone
Can't you just forgive and make it all right
Myabe then I can sleep through the night
My bloodshot eyes slowly close
As the mountains and rocks of the world corrode
I'm floating away higher and higher
Maybe one day I'll rsie out of this fire
{Chorus}
Verse 3:
First I'm in fast forward
Then I'm in rewind
Why do you disappear then sneak up from behind?
I was in a big mansion
Now I'm livin' in a box
And now suddenley I feel hunted like a fox
{Chorus}
Where I wanna be!
Where I wanna be!
Where I wanna.......BE!
Thanks for reading it if you did lol.
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I haven't posted anything here before, but, as I feel these are my most 'personal' and heaviest lyrics personaly to date from me. It's not done yet, but;
Broken hearted, left behind
I fail to see why I even tried
To mend the past, and move on
When I was the one who fell so fast
You left me behind, on the other side
High n' dry, once again.
Nothing really matters, just your illusions
Failed to realize that you'll never find another one
Just like me
Broken, broken, broken hearted, left behind
Right back where I was before, just another day
In my fucked illusion
Don't understand, what the trying was for
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Quote from: Almost Famous on January 02, 2007, 11:25:50 PM
I haven't posted anything here before, but, as I feel these are my most 'personal' and heaviest lyrics personaly to date from me. It's not done yet, but;
Broken hearted, left behind
I fail to see why I even tried
To mend the past, and move on
When I was the one who fell so fast
You left me behind, on the other side
High n' dry, once again.
Nothing really matters, just your illusions
Failed to realize that you'll never find another one
Just like me
Broken, broken, broken hearted, left behind
Right back where I was before, just another day
In my fucked illusion
Don't understand, what the trying was for
I saw this at RFF
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I like it AF
Good stuff
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January 03, 2007, 03:29:29 PM »
im lost in this world
without you
im cold,
alone
i never wanted to leave you
but i had to
your love for me
had gone
my days are filled with empty
but my life
is now
no lie
so you can go
fuck ur suga daddy
bitch u can fuck him
till u dieeeeeeee
ur just a whooorrreeeeeeeee
ur just a whorrrrreeeeeeeeee
u dont deserve to lick my floor
u slither around leaven ur slimey trail
now im gonna fuck you once more
with my shotgun.......fuckin bitch
ha ha what a mess?
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I've got two, this one..
I'm in a prison cell
That I made all alone
I layed every brick and set every stone
I put up the bars
To hold me in
I've payed all the guards
To keep me from sin
But I've sinned anyway
I've gone off the path
I've lived a bad way
And worked at my craft
I've gotten so good, I fool everyone else
But the best trick I learned
Was fooling myself
and this one..
Tell me about your life, but let's start at the end
Take a walk back with me, and we'll see it all again
Show me your family and the friends that you've made
Tell me your dreams, all the games that you played
Were you told any secrets, and did you then tell
Was your word good enough, or was it for sale
Was anyone willing to die for you
Or is that something that noone would do
Were there debts left over for others to pay
Or is your conscience clear as you go on your way
But where to begin, that's the very hardest part
No matter where we end, it's really just the start
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^ I love those two, especially the second one.
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Thanks Journey. I've actually got a lot of them, but I'm not sure if they're any good. I did write this one that I thought was pretty good..
What does she mean to me, the question was posed
Is she your sunrise or a beautiful rose
Is she the reason for the smile on your face
Is she the season for the time of your place
And if she is, then tell me why
Too many times you made her cry
Too many times, I don't know why
Too many times I made you cry
The life you always wanted, I just couldn't live
The love you always gave, I just wouldn't give
I don't have a reason, and I don't know why
Too many times I made you cry
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Quote from: Sin Cut on January 29, 2007, 01:37:44 PM
needed to write something to get this bad feel out of my system. Comments are wellcome.
Baby, You're right, the mistake was mine
for ever forgiving you a second time.
29.1.2007
Baby, I did my time
forgiving you too many times
and I should've known; 'twas bound to die
Oh yeah, baby, and I nailed you (too)
'twas too easy to be counted a crime
and again I have the look in my eyes
'cos all the things I claimed - I've had
Baby, I did my time
living in a condemned lie
and I ain't letting you bring me down
'cos all the things you could give I all ready had
baby, just go crying - to that other man
and tell him how I didn't take your cheating as a sign
to give you more quality time
I've made my mistakes from time to time
nailing you in the men's room wasn't one
I should've just have noticed
there's nothing to gain to see you a second time
And baby, now you left me, thinking I'd cry
And I'm having a good time repeating my crime
And I try to get it right going serial this time
You're just my left-overs this time around.
I liked that a lot
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