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[Jesse James]

(Happy) When You Smile

Time can heal and time can kill, there's nothing we can do
Memries all that's left behind, to find, I'm feelin blue
I felt the joy and happiness and then I fell from grace
I'd travel night n day for a chance to see your face

Everything changes but my feelings stay the same
It hurts me even more cause I know that I'm to blame

It doesn't matter if youre with me or away
It makes no difference what i do or what I say
And I don't care if my heart bleeds once in a while
I'm only happy when you smile

I wrote a song and I thought I could make u mine
the world is full of fools, among them I would shine
Now I'm just thankful for the time u spent with me
that fool could be your slave, but your kindness set him free

That night will always be a part of my dreams
your teardrops blinded me, but the truth came to light
that place will never be for me what it seems
Me, You, Your Eyes And The Summer Night

[Sin Cut]

I Was A Fighter

I look at the blank spots on the wall
I can't find an insight to make things right
I just have to get this outta my sight

I still get the paper everyday, with no news for me
I lit my smoke with hands shaking
and wonder what am I waiting for?

I thought I was a fighter, but it's so hard to stand tall
I can take the cuts, but I feel I'm out of heart
I had a reason to fight back, but I'm getting numb
I thought I was a fighter, but now I trade my gloves for a gun
Yeah, that way it's much more fun!

The world is full places
But I just want to get away
I stare at the paper and wonder about the faces
And I did trade my gloves for a gun
And I wonder what the fuck am I still waiting for the fun?

I thought I was a fighter, but it's so hard to stand tall
I can take the cuts, but I feel I'm out of heart

[MoonMax]

I Was A Fighter

I look at the blank spots on the wall
I can't find an insight to make things right
I just have to get this outta my sight

I still get the paper everyday, with no news for me
I lit my smoke with hands shaking
and wonder what am I waiting for?

I thought I was a fighter, but it's so hard to stand tall
I can take the cuts, but I feel I'm out of heart
I had a reason to fight back, but I'm getting numb
I thought I was a fighter, but now I trade my gloves for a gun
Yeah, that way it's much more fun!

The world is full places
But I just want to get away
I stare at the paper and wonder about the faces
And I did trade my gloves for a gun
And I wonder what the fuck am I still waiting for the fun?

I thought I was a fighter, but it's so hard to stand tall
I can take the cuts, but I feel I'm out of heart

As I understand this is about frustration and ways of solving problems, right?

What are gloves in the line

"I trade my gloves for a gun" ?


Cheers
MoonMax

[Sin Cut]

I Was A Fighter

I look at the blank spots on the wall
I can't find an insight to make things right
I just have to get this outta my sight

I still get the paper everyday, with no news for me
I lit my smoke with hands shaking
and wonder what am I waiting for?

I thought I was a fighter, but it's so hard to stand tall
I can take the cuts, but I feel I'm out of heart
I had a reason to fight back, but I'm getting numb
I thought I was a fighter, but now I trade my gloves for a gun
Yeah, that way it's much more fun!

The world is full places
But I just want to get away
I stare at the paper and wonder about the faces
And I did trade my gloves for a gun
And I wonder what the fuck am I still waiting for the fun?

I thought I was a fighter, but it's so hard to stand tall
I can take the cuts, but I feel I'm out of heart

As I understand this is about frustration and ways of solving problems, right?

What are gloves in the line

"I trade my gloves for a gun" ?


Cheers
MoonMax

Yeah, the song is basicly about frustration with my gf mother and that two guys beat me up last weekend (more in the jungle - got beat up-thread)

I've done boxing but now I trade my gloves for a gun 

[MoonMax]

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Yeah, the song is basicly about frustration with my gf mother and that two guys beat me up last weekend (more in the jungle - got beat up-thread)

I've done boxing but now I trade my gloves for a gun?

I don't know if You use that kind of saying, but here in Poland we use phrase like "to solve something in white gloves", which means doing something without makiking your hands dirty - it's political way - diplomatic.

I thought, that if You wrote your lyrics that way, you know, you wanted to be cool with everything, but the world around isn't ready for conversation but like always is ready to fight, that line "I trade my gloves for a gun", would have very powerful meaning.


Cheers
MoonMax


PS How you do this, that when you quote, there's a qutoed part separated from your new lines? When I quote my text is in the same "frame" as quoted part!!

[MoonMax]

Hi guys. Need some help here. I done this like 6 or 7 years ago, but now I thinking about "some final touches", hehe.

English isn't my nativ language(I just like to write in english), so could You guys help me, and say if this sounds good in english, if American or British people would put it that way.

Here it goes(it's blues song)


Whiskey Forever

Here in the bar called blues
Where some stories ends
Some other begins
With the bottle of bear,or
Make even two
You can hear my tail
You can hear my raves


Here in the bar called blues
I'm drunk again, it sucks, but yeah!
I better go out and drink some air
I maybe find a bench, I need to sleep somewhere


So...
I lyin' watching the sky...
Stars! Are you blinkin to me?
What da hell you know, about my live down here,oh

I need to drink, I need to drink
Bottle of whiskey, my baby forever



_______________________

That's it. What do You think? Comments?


Cheers
MoonMax

[loretian]

Here are the lyrics to my latest song (already posted in another thread), which you can download from my website or directly.

South
By Joe the Derelict

When you say what you'll do
when you move and you talk
When you say how you'll act
then you wave and you walk
I know that you don't mean anything
I know that you won't mean anything

Let me go
Let me stay
Let me go
Let me stay

I already know too many like you
You say one thing but it's not what you do
And I never could find somebody just like you
cause I love what you say and I love how you do

The music is here
And you wander away
But the music here

When I say what I'll do
when you move and I talk
When I say how I'll act
then you wave and I walk
You know that I don't mean anything
You know that I won't mean anything

Please don't go
Please don't stay
Please don't go
Please don't stay

And I already know somebody like you
She'd say one thing but it's not what she'd do
And you never could be happy with somebody like me
Cause I sleep all alone and I avoid misery

The music is here
And you wander away
But the music is here
The music is here
And I see you're alone

The music is here
And you wander away
But the music is here
The music is here
And I see you're alone

One slash, one break
and I fell apart
One heart, one mind
And I fell behind
One time, I saw
Those things you draw
One fall, I fell
I saw my hell
I wonder why you can't resolve
I wonder why I see white doves
I wonder what it means to be
I try to solve this mystery

Finally I rose
I soared above the heavens
I saw you bathed in rose
I saw all hell, I saw all heavens
I know what I must do
I'll walk alone, my chosen path
Until finally I break on through

[Queen of Everything]

This must seem really deep - but it isnt.  It is about the person who means the most to me - am I in love?  That is up to you.     It comes from the heart - but it isnt as creepy as it sounds.

The mask slips off your face when you are raising your hands to hide
You can?t show the world that you are speaking
You don?t even know why
That when you spin we?ll all spin to
Nothings the same with me and you
I know you are there and you know I am with you
We cannot see each other all the time.
You are my one my only person I know I can believe in
I would chase your skeletons to the edge of my mind

Because I have to change the future
You can be there to.
I have to see we are different
But exact, me and you.
I know that it wont be easy,
I know I will feel ache
I need to hug the women in the glass.
I need you to realize its me.

When the world boils and the rain is rising up
We cannot run but we can pull each other up
I scream and yell without a cause and we both know it seems wrong
Whats all this taking about?  We are all alone.
You aren?t enough to heal my wounds
Or cover where I hide.
The gun will shoot me down from where I am
It will shoot from the inside.

Because I have to change the future
You can be there to.
I have to see we are different
But exact, me and you.
I know that it wont be easy,
I know I will feel ache
I need to hug the women in the glass.
I need you to realize its me.

At this point I cannot see why we are here
Just you and me
I cannot see the clock striking thirteen
My cupboards been closed and will not be open
Until you open yours
I am not in love I am just insane

But you need to realize its me.

Its a bit confussing - because it is a bit ill-logical, its meant to be more thought provoking like a piece of abstract art than a story you can easily understand.

  Hope you all Like 

[Queen of Everything]

Heres another (Angry song)

This was how I felt with a friend of mine who was being a MEGA prick and couldn't make up his mind to be like friends or to be a prick and act too up himself.

Bloody hell I heard you yell
You wont make up your mind
You take my mind
You?re like a child
Playing me like a freaking game

You are so fucking insane
It makes me spin in my brain
I want to hear you scream my name
I wanna hear you go insane
Because you are so so so

I hate the way you?re such a prick
Every second day
You?re a freakin phsycopath
You cannot decide
You hate and love and freaking hate.

You are so fucking insane
It makes me spin in my brain
I want to hear you scream my name
I wanna hear you go insane
Because you are so so so

You make me so fucked up,
But im too fucked up to complain
You?re like a drug
You?re so freaking smug.
Back to square one
You?re in the ring
With me and your aggression

You are so fucking insane
It makes me spin in my brain
I want to hear you scream my name
I wanna hear you go insane
Because you are so so so?

So So So
Just so fuckin INSANE
You?re too fucking insane
Make up your mind
Stop being fucking insane
So So So
Fucking? insane

Its very angry - I was very angry.    (Sorry to post two in a row - dont hate me)

[Rockin' Rose]

Been sober for about three weeks after wondering in the haze again for about nine months, I haven't written anything casual for long time but today I started to think about my up coming birthday and I just needed to get something on paper


Soon it's that time of the year again, time to party and have some fun, birthday's coming up but I don't feel like celebrating, as there's no one who I really know or trust.

I feel I've made some friends over the year, but I don't think they'r true, they never call just to ask how are you? And would they be there to comfort me when I feel sad? Or be there if I needed a helping hand?

I thought this year would be different than the last, it's been a lot better though, since I haven't felt so depressed or truly sad. But it's O.K. no really, I don't mind, it's a movie that I've seen so many times.

[journey]

(Happy) When You Smile

Time can heal and time can kill, there's nothing we can do
Memries all that's left behind, to find, I'm feelin blue
I felt the joy and happiness and then I fell from grace
I'd travel night n day for a chance to see your face

Everything changes but my feelings stay the same
It hurts me even more cause I know that I'm to blame

It doesn't matter if youre with me or away
It makes no difference what i do or what I say
And I don't care if my heart bleeds once in a while
I'm only happy when you smile

I wrote a song and I thought I could make u mine
the world is full of fools, among them I would shine
Now I'm just thankful for the time u spent with me
that fool could be your slave, but your kindness set him free

That night will always be a part of my dreams
your teardrops blinded me, but the truth came to light
that place will never be for me what it seems
Me, You, Your Eyes And The Summer Night

Wow, that's awesome. So eloquently written.

[Thorazine Shuffle]

                               BREAKTHROUGH

AS I SAY HELLO TO THE FACE IN THE MIRROR
A MAN I SEEM TO HAVE RECOGNIZED BEFORE
HE LOOKS AT ME WITH A PAINFUL STARE
HE SAID HE?S HAD A LIFE YOU WOULD?NT DARE
BELIEVE, AND PAINFULLY HE TELLS ME THE STORY
OF HAPPINESS DECEIT, RAGE AND GRIEF

DON?T LET THIS HAPPEN TO YOU
BUT I THINK WE?VE HAD A BREAKTHROUGH
THE PRESSURE HAS FADED
BUT AM I STILL, THE SAME

SOULESS FACE IN THE MIRROR TELL ME
WHAT HAS BECOME OF MY TREACHORUS FATE
THAT SEEMS TO HAVE BECOME OF ME
SEEKING ME WITH HIS CONIVING GRIN
THROWING ME LIKE MY ASHES FROM AN URN
DRIFTING ME OUT TO SEA

DON?T LET THIS HAPPEN TO YOU
BUT I THINK WE?VE HAD A BREAKTHROUGH
THE PRESSURE HAS FADED
BUT AM I STILL, THE SAME

I SHED MY SKIN TO BECOME A BETTER PERSON
AND THE SNAKE IN ME STRIKES AT WHAT PURITY I HAVE BUILT
I SHED MY SKIN TO BECOME A BETTER PERSON
AND THE SNAKE IN ME STRIKES AT WHAT PURITY I HAVE BUILT

[journey]

? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ?BREAKTHROUGH

AS I SAY HELLO TO THE FACE IN THE MIRROR
A MAN I SEEM TO HAVE RECOGNIZED BEFORE
HE LOOKS AT ME WITH A PAINFUL STARE
HE SAID HE?S HAD A LIFE YOU WOULD?NT DARE
BELIEVE, AND PAINFULLY HE TELLS ME THE STORY
OF HAPPINESS DECEIT, RAGE AND GRIEF

DON?T LET THIS HAPPEN TO YOU
BUT I THINK WE?VE HAD A BREAKTHROUGH
THE PRESSURE HAS FADED
BUT AM I STILL, THE SAME

SOULESS FACE IN THE MIRROR TELL ME
WHAT HAS BECOME OF MY TREACHORUS FATE
THAT SEEMS TO HAVE BECOME OF ME
SEEKING ME WITH HIS CONIVING GRIN
THROWING ME LIKE MY ASHES FROM AN URN
DRIFTING ME OUT TO SEA

DON?T LET THIS HAPPEN TO YOU
BUT I THINK WE?VE HAD A BREAKTHROUGH
THE PRESSURE HAS FADED
BUT AM I STILL, THE SAME

I SHED MY SKIN TO BECOME A BETTER PERSON
AND THE SNAKE IN ME STRIKES AT WHAT PURITY I HAVE BUILT
I SHED MY SKIN TO BECOME A BETTER PERSON
AND THE SNAKE IN ME STRIKES AT WHAT PURITY I HAVE BUILT

That would make a cool song.

[Thorazine Shuffle]

? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ?BREAKTHROUGH

AS I SAY HELLO TO THE FACE IN THE MIRROR
A MAN I SEEM TO HAVE RECOGNIZED BEFORE
HE LOOKS AT ME WITH A PAINFUL STARE
HE SAID HE?S HAD A LIFE YOU WOULD?NT DARE
BELIEVE, AND PAINFULLY HE TELLS ME THE STORY
OF HAPPINESS DECEIT, RAGE AND GRIEF

DON?T LET THIS HAPPEN TO YOU
BUT I THINK WE?VE HAD A BREAKTHROUGH
THE PRESSURE HAS FADED
BUT AM I STILL, THE SAME

SOULESS FACE IN THE MIRROR TELL ME
WHAT HAS BECOME OF MY TREACHORUS FATE
THAT SEEMS TO HAVE BECOME OF ME
SEEKING ME WITH HIS CONIVING GRIN
THROWING ME LIKE MY ASHES FROM AN URN
DRIFTING ME OUT TO SEA

DON?T LET THIS HAPPEN TO YOU
BUT I THINK WE?VE HAD A BREAKTHROUGH
THE PRESSURE HAS FADED
BUT AM I STILL, THE SAME

I SHED MY SKIN TO BECOME A BETTER PERSON
AND THE SNAKE IN ME STRIKES AT WHAT PURITY I HAVE BUILT
I SHED MY SKIN TO BECOME A BETTER PERSON
AND THE SNAKE IN ME STRIKES AT WHAT PURITY I HAVE BUILT

That would make a cool song.

Thanks.  It's actually one of my songs in my band.

www.myspace.com/exit187

[Sin Cut]

You're my peace


I tried to make a lovestory
an' when I'm outta excuses, I just try to forget
There's a world I am,
and sometimes there's not much left

I needs us to come through
In an empty world you're my peace (to tear apart)

I try to make it the best I can
When it's hard, I sit down to plan
'cos tomorrows hafta be better
since today was much too hard

I need us to come true, honey
In an empty world, I'm your war

I'm crucified by a lie
An' when only mortal, it's so easy to die
'cos I'm outta excuses, an' can't forget
Since without you it's an empty world
with nothing left

No more explanations, no more twisting lies
Everything I could say; what a waste of time
Seasons are changing if we can see another day
Someone said tomorrow the war is better
But my war is growing tired to fight

But it's over.

[Sparksry]

That Was Good I HAve no negative feedback it was realy cool

[emmigrant]

there?s a wire through our lives
it?s twisted and it cuts like a knife
the burning rage keeps you alive
as the allied lies color the sky

this is WAR
I?m in the middle of it all
this is WAR
I?m fighting till I fall
this is WAR
my love is an army tall
let love kill em all
this is WAR


a single rose under fire sky
color red now washed away
the thorns don?t cut my love
but it withers if held to close

you can?t be that fragile
you?ll die without a fight
you can?t be that fragile
you?ll die without a fight

this is WAR
I?m in the middle of it all
this is WAR
I?m fighting till I fall
this is WAR
my love is an army tall
let love kill em all

poison drops in the corner of their eyes
in serpent style you turn the crime
bent and shaped until feeling raped
out of bounds of the holy sound

this is WAR
I?m in the middle of it all
this is WAR
I?m fighting till I fall
this is WAR
my love is an army tall
let love kill em all

[emmigrant]

nobody? 
did I kill this thread?

[mr. moustache]

Time

The hurried rush of a slow moving minute
Time weighs down the one in haste
The sky, unaffected by passing hours,
Lays in darkness only outshone by the glowing moon
Which causes the light to glisten off the water with a frozen tint
Almost like a broken mirror, but greater even still
The night, the lonely night
Time is short for those who sleep

[journey]

Time

The hurried rush of a slow moving minute
Time weighs down the one in haste
The sky, unaffected by passing hours,
Lays in darkness only outshone by the glowing moon
Which causes the light to glisten off the water with a frozen tint
Almost like a broken mirror, but greater even still
The night, the lonely night
Time is short for those who sleep

That's so awesome!