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[ChristineP]

Something that came to me today?


Nervous Heart (2nd draft)


I thought I had it all together
until my head said no
looked deep down inside
trying to find why
(you don't owe me anything , you snooze you loose )

It's not arrogance, it's fear
It's about digging deep inside
and find out what's the truth
But I am not alone with this one

Pressing matter...

How would that have been, just put my head down and dream peacefully
when people are looking for the facts
I didn't want that to be, like dirty laundry
How would that wear
- Talking parts
(so why do you think he left the bag in front of your door?- dunno)
(so he just appeared?-No, I guess he was waiting for me to return)

Chorus


I wanted to share that with you
You know that, talking is always good
(so what would you like to talk about today)
(I don't know of him-good)

Once the anger has gone
I'm hoping we can fit it in

People all around
How can you even understand
After everything that's been done
How could things have gone so wrong?
I mean, do I even have a heart, yes I do
So why would I run so far away, Like how bad would it be

I am a silly, scared, selfish little girl
Figuring out why I would be so stupid
To hurt myself and hurt someone, the only one that cared
-talking part
(we only have 10 more minutes, what do you want to accomplish this hour)
(let me call your doctor and see what pills your on!- Lady, I don't even like to take pills, I don't even do drugs)


Chorus

I realized my world is like a bad attitude
I don't mean to be so strong, but weak when it comes to you
I am not proud of the pain I have caused

Sometimes you hurt the ones you love the most
The ones that love you the most do too
That's life I guess, I don't know, No one I know has the answers
It's a big blurr of disappointment


Chorus
No matter what I do
No matter what I say
Every song I hear now
When I am looking for a way
Everyone is looking for the same

Taking part
(Soulshine is better than sunshine, better than moonshine, damm sure better than Vancouver Rain...)

Don't know if I am saying what I mean in the right way, but It is not meant in a bad way.
This song is dedicated to my heart and my two beautiful girls. Happiness is on the way.

[loretian]

These are the lyrics for a song I will be releasing next week (I'll post it here), featuring the awesome guitar work of Don't Try Me, the amazing sax playing of Smallz, and the vocal talents of Erik Espe (http://www.erikespe.com).? I will also be releasing it with two other new songs as a single in the coming months. It's called, My Favorite Fantasy

Not that anyone was hotly anticipating this, but I just wanted to let you all know I'm not going to be able to release the song this week.  I've been working my ass off trying to get it mixed properly, but it's not coming together exactly how I wanted, and I need to take a break from the song for a few weeks and work on other stuff.

I will be releasing this song relatively soon though, along with, hopefully two or three more.  The artwork for the single release is nearly complete, and I will post that when it's done as well.

[youngerformofaxl]

These are the lyrics for a song I will be releasing next week (I'll post it here), featuring the awesome guitar work of Don't Try Me, the amazing sax playing of Smallz, and the vocal talents of Erik Espe (http://www.erikespe.com).? I will also be releasing it with two other new songs as a single in the coming months. It's called, My Favorite Fantasy

Not that anyone was hotly anticipating this, but I just wanted to let you all know I'm not going to be able to release the song this week.? I've been working my ass off trying to get it mixed properly, but it's not coming together exactly how I wanted, and I need to take a break from the song for a few weeks and work on other stuff.

I will be releasing this song relatively soon though, along with, hopefully two or three more.? The artwork for the single release is nearly complete, and I will post that when it's done as well.

Don't worry, I know the song will be great when it is released

[D]

soft voice: good side

i wish someday i could meet you in real life
pay you back for your fuckin lies
the shit id do to u borders on the midevil style
thinkin about your misery always makes me smile

its cool that u are a piece of shit
but some stuff i can never forget
youre a fraudulent fuckin attention whore
you dont deserve to breathe or live anymore

ive always been schizophrenic i have two different sides
one who is happy and sensitive the other evil and vile


(dark side vocal *see the song "death of me" for an example)

push me too far motherfucker and you'll see what i can do
cause frustration leads to anger;anger turns to hatred;? hatred transforms to violence? and violence sometimes soothes

(soft side)
i gotta run away get my head straight do something? before i explode
i gotta take some time try to shut off my mind from havin another episode

(dark side)
i have animalistic rage sometimes its not safe to be in a room with me
you better run before i come undone and slit my wrists to watch myself bleed

(soft side)
life is over rated just like masturbating to the same porno
im out of my mind but i hope in time i can gain back some control
i gotta escape im tired of bein enslaved in my daily routine
work sucks life sucks my dreams are fucked up they make me wanna scream


(dark side)
you reallythought that u were suppose to be somebody but u are a loser fuck
u thought u were gonna be a famous musician but in reality u suck
so what do u do? now? live with your? mom and make minimium wage
what kind of life is that i ask you'd be better off in a grave
u? dont deserve? the woman u got she deserves better and its true
you're a weak insecure small little bitch with a baby like attitude
(dark side)
why would she love? your weak pussy ass?
what can u give her? it wont be long before she throws you out with the trash
so let me take over? ill steer us the right way hold on tight u dont have to be afraid
just let go, let me take the wheel give me control and we wont ever hurt no more

(dark side)
u dont need anyone just me cause in reality im the only one who cares
and in the end im all we got to count on no one else will be there
no one loves you, no one cares about you i hate to break u this news
some people are born to win but face it u were born to lose
(dark side)
i let u do things your way for far too long, its my turn now motherfucker slide on over dont try to fight
u fucked us up once with your pussy shit now let me show u how to fly
(soft side)
this is my battle the clash i have inside
two personalities engaged in a life long fight
(soft side)
will i ever regain my sanity? will total control return to me?
will i ever get back my peace of mind and trust or die tragically
(soft)
my life feels almost over if i lost you it would surely be
cause my soul was runnin low when i met u, without u it would be empty




THIS SONG WAS WROTE 10/16/04 freestyled off my head. thanks for reading, its one of those nights.


before i put it on a cd ill probably edit it some. thats a first draft.....

[ChristineP]

   To the little blurb above!

""meet you in real life"? 

[D]

that is my fast hard evil side of songwriting, it might not make the CD. we will see.

[ChristineP]

 I think your right!? This is a good place to vent!  There are many good lines in your verses though!

It reads well, very dark, but interesting point of view.  Your pissed , but willing to still take that chance.

[D]

 i hope i dont piss my girlfriend off? I am actually very very happy beyond belief.

I've always wanted to write a song like this because i know of none that have ever really existed.

It's basically the battle of good and evil that rages inside you. I was in a mood last night and wrote this straight, no notes, no thinkin, i just put my hands to the keyboard and typed, i wrote it in maybe 15 minutes.

You have your calm side and your dark side, everyone has one so i always wanted to write a song that was like a conversation between the two.

im gonna sing light and regular on the good parts, but sing nasty and heavy on the dark parts and kind of battle and argue with myself using two seperate tracks for each vocal.

Once again this is art and nothing more.

In real life im more happy than i have ever been.

People have to understand that for 13 years ive pretty much wrote crooning love songs, ive always had abilities for darker, heavier stuff and this is what comes out when i write heavy.

I know its a huge change from the songs people have read and heard so far but i like to think of myself as a diverse lyricist and songwriter.

[ChristineP]

I had a writting moment...so If I don't put it down, I'll be gone

Artists?

 Title: True to you

Well, today I'm going nowhere (right : OK:)
and tomorrow seems the same (Where is the life I ordered

I have realized the hard work you and your friends have done
They are gone, doing their own thing
and here we have a great man!
I love you.

Don't let go, it might last, I don't have to explain
If you promise to to bring it home to me again
I know I left that time in 2002, I was too gone
But you left me many times before
I am gonna wait right here (please take me outa here)

you wouldn't have to worry
you won't have to do anything (OK whatever)
Just...OH! please , let's go? !If the time ever comes around again,? i'll be there.

Thank you for everything
My only communication.? Have to go.

Goodnight

P.S.-Everything is gonna be alright, I am here for you.? Anytime, any where, anything baby!.? I'll be your friend forever.? ?I love you.? Always.? (never forget anything).? this is to my friend Michael, whom I love to the stars and back!? Thank you for all your love.? Not trying to embarrass you, at all.? Your one in a million too!.

[Tied-Up]

this is a poem I wrote several years ago, called Captive:

I am lost, capitivated
You are all I see.
I am caught, a butterfly
trapped within your wicked weave

In your eyes
Captivating
I've lost myself,
Integrating

Shielded from the outside world
Your presence envelops me
Protected am I
Your cocoon transforms me

I am lost.  Without you
I cannot breathe, I cannot see
I accept my fate - a prisoner
Locked away, I am not free

Captivity
is
Ecstasy

[ChristineP]

this is a poem I wrote several years ago, called Captive:

I am lost, capitivated
You are all I see.
I am caught, a butterfly
trapped within your wicked weave

In your eyes
Captivating
I've lost myself,
Integrating

Shielded from the outside world
Your presence envelops me
Protected am I
Your cocoon transforms me

I am lost.? Without you
I cannot breathe, I cannot see
I accept my fate - a prisoner
Locked away, I am not free

Captivity
is
Ecstasy

Captivity is ecstasy=happy sex life?  That's cool.  If you can get him to spend time? COOL.  Busy life for all.

[ChristineP]

I had a writting moment...so If I don't put it down, i'll be gone

Artists?

 Title: True to you

Well, today I'm going nowhere (right )
and tomorrow seems the same (Where is the life I ordered

I have realized the hard work you and your friends have done
They are gone, doing their own thing
and here we have a great man!
I love you.

Don't let go, it might last, I don't have to explain
If you promise to to bring it home to me again
I know I left that time in 2002, I was too gone
But you left me many times before
I am gonna wait right here (please take me outa here)

you wouldn't have to worry
you won't have to do anything (OK whatever)
Just...OH! please , let's go? !If the time ever comes around again,? i'll be there.

Thank you for everything
My only communication.? Have to go.

Goodnight

that sucked...too many coors lights!  I need to edit this one for the big studio

[ChristineP]

I am having too much fun on this thread lately...

I have an idea for a song...Only a title, maybe some of you artists here can help me write it?

Titled- Rocket Star!? Not being a smart ass, think it has great potential?

Maybe something to do with the stars.? Funny, I was in Toronto the other day.? The room where I stayed had this huge power line structure, near the airport.? It simulated the power of a man.? I mean, his P.? I went on thinking that mostly men run the world and power is money, but sex is power too.? Hmmm..weird.

It looked like a big, huge powerful sorce of energy (which it is)? made and created by man.? It was weird.? Men work so hard for their money too.? I thought, the poor working bastards that had to put this all togehter.? Just trying to feed their families.? I give thanks to you.? If I had a camera I would have takin a pictur of it.? Travel lodge, Fich off the 400...So if their is a photographer in that area?? a night scene shot would blow your mind.? It was cool.


Wow.? It was amazing...? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ?
airplanes fly in and out of downtown TO, like every 6 minutes or something...I never gave it a thought.? It was cool.

I was thinking, geeze, there goes my boyfriend, but what other people do I know are coming or going?

Just an idea!? Any thoughts!

[Mama Kin]

Ok, here's something I wrote for a girl. It's not finished yet. I took out the second stanza when I couldn't get it to work...Well, lemme know what you think, even if you hate it...

The Shiver

Wide awake now
My feet can not touch the floor
It's much too cold
I feel the shiver

Your warm breath on my neck
As we sleep
It'll stop the shiver

Enclosed in your arms
At the end of everyday
It'll stop the shiver

Get so lost in your eyes
I feel the stars of sweet surprize
It'll stop the shiver

Please, please don't awake me
From this dream
You've won me now
Please stop this shiver

----

Oh, as I typed this out, I realized the 1st and last stanzas don't really jell that well. "Wide awake"/"don't wake me", so don't bother pointing that out.

[Sin Cut]

This is a song inspired by when my friends gf's ex-bf was gonna beat her up, so things went a bit outta hand, tomorrow I know if there's gonna be any charges against me. At least he ain't gonna beat her again.


"Had It Coming"

Yeah, I knew I had it coming
was only matter of time
But at least I took my shit
with some amount of proud
Yeah, I had it coming
And you saw the look in my eyes
*cos no one ever gonna
need a loser like you

Yeah, I know what was coming
and I had the reasons to stay
My fist is connecting and I only wanna
bring you more pain

All the reasons are floating away
And my hand are pounding
All my reasons are floating away
And you better stay down

Yeah, I knew I had it coming
was only matter of time
But at least I took my shit
with some amount of proud
Yeah, I had it coming
And you saw the look in my eyes
*cos no one ever gonna
need a loser like you

All my agressions an anger packed into one
I don't like what I'd become
I'm sure you didn't like me either
But you learned your leason in pain
And next time my anger turns into rage

[Jessica]

who am i ?

I am heaven and i am hell
I am nightmare and inspire dream
I am whole yet am empty

I am joyful and stay in my shell
I am leader and have no team
I am alone yet never lonely

I am sleeping and am awake
I am beauty but not beautiful
I am all but am nothing

I am sane and have no sake
I am fiery and i am cool
I am me and i am asking :

who am i ?

[youngerformofaxl]

who am i ?

I am heaven and i am hell
I am nightmare and inspire dream
I am whole yet am empty

I am joyful and stay in my shell
I am leader and have no team
I am alone yet never lonely

I am sleeping and am awake
I am beauty but not beautiful
I am all but am nothing

I am sane and have no sake
I am fiery and i am cool
I am me and i am asking :

who am i ?

Jessica.

[Tj]

That's really good Blue; some expressions of anger can really just be annoying, but I can empathise with you by reading that.

And here's my contribution. Girlfriend split up with me last week....

As Acid knows, I'm pretty much against writing lyrics etc., but I've hit a pretty bad low recently, because of splitting up, so...yeah, do please excuse my whining...

Apathy

Thought you'd remember
But you forget
All the promises you uttered, and implanted in the core of my head
I hope you find the
Peace that you need
But you've gotta let me mourn this, 'cause your words are pinballing inside of me

You were the centre of my happiness
The silencer of fears
I used to think you listened, but it seems you blocked your ears
I am a shattered shard of sugar glass
The shadow of a ghost
Your bitterness, it pierced me, but your silence hurt the most.

And you on-
-ly show me
Apathy
Apathy

Thought you were ready
I guess you weren't
I guess we never see the fire 'til the second when we're finally burnt

And my soul's
Full of pain
It won't drain
It won't drain

You are the centre of my misery
The one who shot my heart
With arrows tipped with lead, and you don't care about the scars.
And I'm the echo of a muted whisper
Formed up on the moon
All I seem to do is shudder, fade, and mis-construe

I am the imprint of a fallen leaf
The trail of a tear
The remnants of a memory eroded by the years

I'll lead a nullified existence
Be the ashes of a spark
A wailing in the distance that's so brief it barely starts

I will wither like a wild, lonesome rose
So densely thorned, it could not help but choke

And you on-
-ly show me
Apathy
Apathy

I hope you
Learn to see
What I need
You to see

Please don't show
Anymore
Apathy
Apathy

I have a half-assed tune, rhythm etc., in my head, but I'm not musical.

I hope you like it 

[youngerformofaxl]

TJ, that one had some really good lines to it and it definetely sounded like it could be a song.?

[Tj]

I thank you 

Occasionally, me and a friend get together and try to make a song. We tried it with this, the evening after I was dumped, but it didn't work very well, 'cause I can't sing or play, lol.