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[youngerformofaxl]

Title: Hypocrite
Start Date: 9/8/2003.
End Date: 9/2/2004.
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I can't believe you told my boss
the same things you claimed you hated.
There's a certain line you crossed
and now our friendship has faded.

Chorus:
I don't know where I'm going to
but I'm not going to you.
I don't know where I'm going to
but I'm not going to you.

Now, I can't trust you when we're alone
and I don't feel like Marky Mark.
I want to talk to you in the right tone
but there may be bite with bark.

Chorus

Hypocrites are always gettin in my way.
They think they know exactly what to say.
You think you know me well enough,
Shit! I'd kick your ass if I was buff.

[youngerformofaxl]

Title: Fake It
Start Date: April 2004
End Date: 9/22/2004
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A bitch is what you are.
No, I don't like who you are.
I dispise you & your jokes,
thinkin' bout you makes me choke.

Chorus:
Your weakness is your IQ,
that's why everybody laughs at you.
Your weakness is your IQ
so what can you possibly do?

A pussy is what you are,
drivin' in that ugly-ass car.
No, I won't shake your hand
because this is my land.

Chorus (x2)

You think I'm genna take it,
No bitch, I'm genna fake it.
You think you can mold me,
but you just sold me
to somebody else...somebody else.
SOMEBODY ELSE!!!!!

Chorus (x3)

[youngerformofaxl]

Title: Stop The Voices
Start Date: 2/20/2004
End Date: 7/26/2004
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I can't believe you treated me like that,
it may have been bad but I'm still a human being.
You acted like you were attacked
and now I can't even fucking sing!!!

Chorus:
Stop the voices
I'm getting too weak.
Stop the voices,
I'm too afraid to speak.

You told all your friends you were victimized,
because of a fucking glance!!!!!
You claimed you were trapped inside
of my little fucking dance!!!!!

Chorus (x2)

Stop the voices,
it was just a little peak.
Stop the voices,
I'm not a little freak.

[youngerformofaxl]

Title: The End!
Start Date: 5/24/2004
End Date: 7/28/2004
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Working from the inside out,
I continue my journey towards a better life.
Living with a lot of doubt
but my mind will be ready when it's time to strike.

Chorus:
I know it's hard
but you have to leave.
I know it's hard
but just leave me be.
This is the end!

I've been saving up
for when the moment is right.
Everytime I grab my coffee cup
I wonder if that's you in my sight.

Chorus

This Is The End!

[youngerformofaxl]

Okay, so what did ya' guys think?

[youngerformofaxl]

Come on you guys, give me some sort of response.

Just start at the 11th page where it begins and go all the way to the 14th page where it ends.

[ChristineP]

Just to think

Well the lines of communication are wearing thin
I have to say I have been
thinking about why went wrong
and the days of November are creaping along

My shrink asked for my Doctors name
Hey, what kind of meds are you in
or what the hell is wrong with you
Noone knows what to do

My folks don't want to know my name
My kids are fine as long as I suck dick
I live in a fantasy
thinking of living with you, with me

Fuck the days get so long
I plan to keep moving along
I wish I copuld love this beau I met
He is so good for me, I forget


Just to think I could have had it all
too bad I had to go down the way I did
Maybe someday a hello will mean I care
And take my hand (really) anywhere

Just to think how nice it would be
sleeping beside you and especially
In the morning making love
with bad hair and having fun

Just to think.

[Tj]

Come on you guys, give me some sort of response.

Just start at the 11th page where it begins and go all the way to the 14th page where it ends.

Check your messages  You should have one from me, but I sent someone one recently and it didn't show up for weeks apparently, so if you don't have it, tell me and I'll try sending it again or something.

[youngerformofaxl]

Yep, I got it! I sent you a reply just a few minutes ago.

[Hoce]

Well I'm new in the forum hello jejeje if my lyrics are wrong maybe it's because I'm spanish and got no fuckin' idea about english :S

This song is called Ships in a Lake, and it's about a man that it's about to die.

Sometimes I feel fear when I talk 'bout what waits me
And If all turns black when I finally close my eyes
Sometimes I doubt if all, it's a losing time
But Everything takes sense, when you are by my side.


I wanna change my sails
But the current don't
seems me let me escape


My fortune goes away, with my fame and reputation
But nothin' can move away from my spirit of superation
Don't wanna final yet, say that it's all a dream
Let me wake me in your arms, cause I know that I'm safe there


I wanna change my sails
But the current don't
seems me let me escape


Not Yet, Not Yet, No No, No No No No
Let me drop all my tears before left my love
I wonder If Someday I'll see you again
Meantime drive your life, Like a Ship in a Lake


I wanna change my sails
But the current don't
seems me let me escape

[Tj]

Yep, I got it! I sent you a reply just a few minutes ago.

Cool. Like I said, give me time  I have a pretty bad work ethic, but I'm going to make this my little project.

[ChristineP]

Well I'm new in the forum hello jejeje if my lyrics are wrong maybe it's because I'm spanish and got no fuckin' idea about english :S

This song is called Ships in a Lake, and it's about a man that it's about to die.

Sometimes I feel fear when I talk 'bout what waits me
And If all turns black when I finally close my eyes
Sometimes I doubt if all, it's a losing time
But Everything takes sense, when you are by my side.


I wanna change my sails
But the current don't
seems me let me escape


My fortune goes away, with my fame and reputation
But nothin' can move away from my spirit of superation
Don't wanna final yet, say that it's all a dream
Let me wake me in your arms, cause I know that I'm safe there


I wanna change my sails
But the current don't
seems me let me escape


Not Yet, Not Yet, No No, No No No No
Let me drop all my tears before left my love
I wonder If Someday I'll see you again
Meantime drive your life, Like a Ship in a Lake


I wanna change my sails
But the current don't
seems me let me escape

  Very interesting hoce...  I understood alot of the concepts your are trying to express.  Your writting seems to put you in a tight spot?  Things are going rough?

[ChristineP]

A new Time

The family is falling apart
They can't figure why I want out
The bells keep ringing in my head
They'd rather leave me for dead

Well, In my time of change
I have found bravery
In my time of need
I have found a friend
In deed

The shrink says I am OK
I feel good at night when I go to bed
My heart feels free at last
Don't need exceptance
I am OK


Don't need alot of money
Would be a liar if I said it wouldn't help
Don't need to hear all the people talkin
They just drive me nuts

All I need is love and to be with someone like you
Found myself a cutie
But he's not you
He is a one of kind baby
But he's not you

Moving in the same city
will find me blue
November rain is so close
How about you

[Hoce]

my life goes well got no problems, sometimes i enter in the mind of any person to write about what feels. to write about your own experiences is good but maybe you're losing themes about to write and think, so i think that it's good to write about all, and see the things by the own eyes of the people (sometimes too).
sorry for my english

[loretian]

These are the lyrics for a song I will be releasing next week (I'll post it here), featuring the awesome guitar work of Don't Try Me, the amazing sax playing of Smallz, and the vocal talents of Erik Espe (http://www.erikespe.com).? I will also be releasing it with two other new songs as a single in the coming months. It's called, My Favorite Fantasy

Lost and alone and put out to sea
There's nowhere else I'd rather be
Than here, pretending you're with me
'Cause you're still my favorite fantasy

I saw her eyes, they told me the time
I began to speak, but I felt like a mime
I started to talk but then I stopped
She turned her hips, and then I dropped

Lost and alone and put out to sea
There's nowhere else I'd rather be
Than here, pretending you're with me
'Cause you're still my favorite fantasy

I had a friend ask me how I'm doin
I said I'm fine, but there's noone I'm screwin'
he said I don't understand, how can that be
I said you don't even know all the things that I see

Tonight, I dream, I hold
Tonight, I dream, I touch

Tonight, I dream, I see
Tonight, I dream, she loves

Lost and alone and put out to sea
There's nowhere else I'd rather be
Than here, pretending you're with me
'Cause you're still my favorite fantasy

[youngerformofaxl]

These are the lyrics for a song I will be releasing next week (I'll post it here), featuring the awesome guitar work of Don't Try Me, the amazing sax playing of Smallz, and the vocal talents of Erik Espe (http://www.erikespe.com).? I will also be releasing it with two other new songs as a single in the coming months. It's called, My Favorite Fantasy

Lost and alone and put out to sea
There's nowhere else I'd rather be
Than here, pretending you're with me
'Cause you're still my favorite fantasy

I saw her eyes, they told me the time
I began to speak, but I felt like a mime
I started to talk but then I stopped
She turned her hips, and then I dropped

Lost and alone and put out to sea
There's nowhere else I'd rather be
Than here, pretending you're with me
'Cause you're still my favorite fantasy

I had a friend ask me how I'm doin
I said I'm fine, but there's noone I'm screwin'
he said I don't understand, how can that be
I said you don't even know all the things that I see

Tonight, I dream, I hold
Tonight, I dream, I touch

Tonight, I dream, I see
Tonight, I dream, she loves

Lost and alone and put out to sea
There's nowhere else I'd rather be
Than here, pretending you're with me
'Cause you're still my favorite fantasy

These lyrics are really good; their amazing in fact. Good job!

[loretian]

These lyrics are really good; their amazing in fact. Good job!

Thanks, man. 

[D]

hey dude, email me and tell me how all that came about and be sure to let me hear that!

CD single of that song with Stars and shadows in the night is what i want!

[journey]

You struck my chord and I began to play
That sweet song that always makes my body sway
You give my heart its rhythm
It's such a wonderful feelin'
Your love is the melody I hum
My soul is the instrument that you strum

[D]

You struck my chord and I began to play
That sweet song that always makes my body sway
You give my heart its rhythm
It's such a wonderful feelin'
Your love is the melody I hum
My soul is the instrument that you strum

that is very great, great analogy of love!!!!!!!!!!!!