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[coolman78SLASH]

Ok, this is a song I wrote for a band called TOTAL BLACKOUT in 1995, but it was never used, so I recorded it my self during the summer of 2001. Tell me what you think about it.

I have this woman, that no one knows about
She ain't the type who screams or shout
No, this is the type who goes straight to your head
And she won't leave you untill you'd be lying there dead

She comes to you like pleasure and pain
She comes to you by joint, or vain
And they'd be tryin' to call you on the phone
But no one's answering, coz you ain't home

Set me free, let me be
left alone, with my mind all gone
I wanna leave, let God recive
my pride, in sucide

Why can't we all just lay down on the ground and have sex?

I have now, broken up
but to breake with this bitch, your life have to stop
So here I am, I'm without my wife
I'm all clean now, but without, a motherfuckin' life

So there you have it, now reload your guns and fire at will guys !!

[metalhead666]

MUSTAINE=GOD

[Jessica]

Latest one from me

Lady Isabelle

I sit still beneath the water
Guardian of my land through ages
I still wait for our father
I sit still through life?s phases

Currents come and go above my skull
Northern winds whistle memorable cries
It?s so cold here, the bottom is so dull
Guardian of my land, my hands are tied

All I?m left with is a shadowy face
The one I remember, you, your eyes
I hold on, stuck in this horrible mess
Will you remember your vows?

You and I believed in occult eternity
Centuries have gone by unnoticed
Your new you is by my side already
I need you/him at home with a priest

I cannot go peacefully until you find me
My skeleton rots safely in the deadly sea
I cannot go until the guardian is set free
I cannot go, we played with destiny

Come back to find me in the cold waters
In front of the land that leads to the caves
My hands are tied, forever alive like a sinner
My only tears, gone, with the Scottish waves.

[Mattman]

Latest one from me

Lady Isabelle

I sit still beneath the water
Guardian of my land through ages
I still wait for our father
I sit still through life?s phases

Currents come and go above my skull
Northern winds whistle memorable cries
It?s so cold here, the bottom is so dull
Guardian of my land, my hands are tied

All I?m left with is a shadowy face
The one I remember, you, your eyes
I hold on, stuck in this horrible mess
Will you remember your vows?

You and I believed in occult eternity
Centuries have gone by unnoticed
Your new you is by my side already
I need you/him at home with a priest

I cannot go peacefully until you find me
My skeleton rots safely in the deadly sea
I cannot go until the guardian is set free
I cannot go, we played with destiny

Come back to find me in the cold waters
In front of the land that leads to the caves
My hands are tied, forever alive like a sinner
My only tears, gone, with the Scottish waves.

I like this one...good atmosphere.

[Dave_Rose]

Yesterday
I called you yesterday
Just to see if you?re ok
But something is keeping me here
For all you?re lies you told me, I?m still here

I saw you yesterday
Nothing changed, you passed me by
For all the dreams I?ve had
You get closer every time

Chorus

I never felt this way
Now I never knew who you really were
You can hide beside, now I want to give love
Another chance, it?s breaking me down
And it?s all my fault

I almost lost you yesterday
Told my self that everything is ok
I couldn?t wait I needed to tell the world
And I wanna erase the pain

I needed you yesterday
Because you?re gone
There nothing I can do
I wonder where you are

Chorus

I never felt this way
Now I never knew who you really were
You can hide beside, now I want to give love
Another chance, it?s breaking me down
And it?s all my fault x2

I wonder where you are
I wonder where you were yesterday
You are my everything
I don?t wanna lose you right now

Chorus

I never felt this way
Now I never knew who you really were
You can hide beside, now I want to give love
Another chance, it?s breaking me down
And it?s all my fault

I still can?t turn around
For the dreams that have been shattered
I never knew I?d make it through
But you were there but where were you yesterday?

D. Rose, M. Taylor

[Sin Cut]

Just another player pushin' through your grind tonight
 
 
Nights just started
and for me here's somewhere I won't be
And as I like the game, I drive forward with a smile
 
Night just started
an' it's never about lovin' me
yeah, you're wantin' me, honey
halfway wasted and I won't stay lovin' you
 
Yeah, smoke an the flashing lights
I know what you see an'? like
Wondering about my hardness
There's no need to complicate
find out all the reason why let loose
and why I need to save my soul at nine, yeah!
 
I know you're still waitin' for me
to come over and make as should be
There's no need to be cool
when you're still waiting for me
 
It's all a big illusion
loaded with a bunch of white lies
you may take me to your home, sugar
but in the morning I'd be gone

Just another player pushin' through your grind tonight
yeah, baby, aren't there no bells ringin' in your mind?
 
Nights just started
and all the liqour's free
and I know I wanna
take the better half to me!
just madmans illusion, an' nothing to loose
so go ask about saving my soul
and I'm actin' like I cared
 
Just another player pushin' through your grind tonight
yeah, baby, aren't there no bells ringin' in your mind?
 
It's always so easy
an' like it's halfway done
all I need is to be social
and act like I got nothing to loose
yeah, you need to be hungry
And to play it through
you don't need a doctor to analyse your life
you don't need some advice to realize you've been sold
'cos it's all a game, babe, and this night is growing old
I don't need your reasons
And I don't need your lies
Some of your acusations - what a waste of time
So don't go crying 'cos I won't care
no don't go trying since you lost this anyway!
 
Just another player pushin' through your grind tonight
yeah, baby, aren't there no bells ringin' in your mind?

Yeah, it's too easy
make 'em believe a lie
it's too easy, the best of times
 
Just another player pushin' through your grind tonight
yeah, baby, aren't there no bells ringin' in your mind?

[Thumpy]

hi there,

here's a song I wrote. Any feedback would be muchly appreciated. The solo is kinda Slash inspired.

just click on the orange disc symbol

http://www.mp3.de/musik/genre/band/040000/251931/31_165782

The lyrics go like this:

ROSELESS ROSE

As it sits in a vase
A story noone knows
The sad pathetic story
Of the Roseless Rose
Just a stem and some thorns
No flower adorns
The petals lost and torn
The Roseless Rose

So please don't take away my Roseless Rose
Never take away my Roseless Rose
It was beautiful at one time
Topped by the deepest red
A symbol of love entwined
A symbol so pure and divine

So the story has been told
Bout a flower growin' old
The petals now they're gone
And no scent will linger on
The thorns still cut deep
My heart it makes bleed
It's a story noone knows
The Roseless Rose

[youngerformofaxl]

A huge update coming from the Younger Form of Axl coming within' the next week:

"The Black Notebook"

including hits: Get Real, Marky Mark, Jeni, Love Song & Medieval.

If all goes well tonight, I'll start posting it tomorrow night.

Get ready for the juggernaught!

[youngerformofaxl]

THE BLACK NOTEBOOK (JULY 8TH, 2003-JULY 25TH, 2004):

I'm going to post each song/poem as one post and I just ask people their opinions of the writing. You can even give it a rating if you want like 7/10 or 3 starts out of 5 or whatever you guys want.You might want to PM me because it is a lot to analyze but it's really up to you.

[youngerformofaxl]

Title: When I Look Back
Start Date: 11/16/2003
End Date: 9/2/2004
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There is no excuse
for letting that notebook get loose.
I let all my secrets fall out
and I was forced to come out.
They believed what they wanted,
I tried to prove what I needed.
It took me the rest of high school
to prove I was worthy of being cool.

Chorus:
When I look back, it was all just a stage.
When I look back, it was just repressed rage.
When I look back, it was a materpiece.
When I look back, it was just insane.
When I look back, it's just too tough to explain.

Without any reasoning
I kept pouring on the seasoning.
I didn't know how to stop
because no one made me stop.
If I had my way
I woulda' stopped it the very 1st day.
But, it just kept on repeating
as I never even took a beating.

Chorus (x2)

Do you know what time it is?
It's time to step into my mind.
Do you really think I've gotten better?
Nope! I've just hidden it better.
LADIES AND GENTLEMEN
INTRODUCING...
The Younger Form of Axl!

"Welcome To My Jungle!"

[youngerformofaxl]

Title: Marky Mark
Start Date: 2/3/2004
End Date: 8/30/2004
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Yeah, I'm going to enter your mind
once you hear that familar sound.
I'm going to take you from behind
and put my hands over the mound.

I don't know how it got to be like this
but I have to use my tongue when I kiss.
You my boss gave me my name
and since then I just haven't been the same.

Chorus:
Marky Mark (he's got a small pecker but he'll use it with pride.)
Marky Mark (there's is no charge & it's one hell of a ride.)
Marky Mark (you think you know him until he shocks you again.)
Marky Mark (you'll have to keep an extra eye out for your boyfriend.)

Yeah, I'm going to chase you into your room
and spank you for being such a bad girl.
I'll make you scream the name of the groom
when my tongue starts to curl.

I don't know how it got to be like this
but I have to use my tongue when I kiss.
You see my boss gave me my name
and since then I just haven't been the same.

Chorus

I betcha think you know me,
I bet you wanna know me.
You wanna talk to me,
Come & talk to me.
You wanna tell me somethin...
Tell me anything.
You ready to seduce,
I don't think you're ready for my juice.

Chorus (x2)

I'm just Marky Mark, Marky Mark, Marky Mark.
I'm just Marky Mark, Marky Mark, Marky Mark.
I'm just Marky Mark, Marky Mark, Marky Mark.
I'm just Marky Mark, Marky Mark, Marky Mark.
What do you expect?

[youngerformofaxl]

Title: Soul, Power, Youth, Idol
3/22/2004
-----

My reflection in the mirror
is a genius jacking off.
But, that's not as bad as my fear
that society will shut reality off.
People keep trying to protect me
but they can't stop the truth.
By now, you should be able to see
that I'm pulling away from my youth.

Chorus:
My street was so dark
and the lights were so bright.
I coulden't remember how to park
but my home was in sight.
I had to light my candles
because someone had cute the power.
The string of scandles
had made my soul sour.

I have been cursed by love
but all you see is smiles.
I have seen the land above
but the journey still seems like miles.
I can define controversy
but I'm sure you don't want me to.
Maybe, I can buy a new jersey
and this time make fun of you.

Chorus

If you were here, I'd be alright.

I have been bailed out of trouble
when God was my only friend.
I already know my deprivation is double
that of my closest ally or friend.
For my age, I've been thru a lot
that can be considered cruel & unusual punishment.
Maybe, if I woulden't of been caught
I would be making less of a statement.

Chorus

If you were, I'd be alright (x3)

[youngerformofaxl]

Title: Safe With Me.
6/20/2004
-----
He tells me all this dreams
including the ones with me.
He lets me read his poetry
while putting his hand on my knee.

But, his dad won't let him inside
so he has to live on the outside.
His enemies pushed him down
and made him leave town.

He tells me all his stories
and never leaves out any of the glory.
I love to hold him when he cries
because he really does try.

(Don't worry, you'll be safe with me.)

He tells me his dreams
including the ones with me.
I let him read my poetry
while putting my hand on his knee.

His dad won't let him on the inside
so he has to live on the outside.
His enemies pushed him down
and made him leave town.

(Don't worry, you'll be safe with me.)

[youngerformofaxl]

Title: Fuck That!
Start Date: 3/2/2004
End Date: 9/5/2004
-----

I do not follow the principles of Dad,
I don't follow the principles of anyone.
Some say what I do makes them mad
well If I did it your way, I woulden't be having fun.

I'm going to do what I want to do
and nobody is going to stop me.
There is nothing that you can do
to stop me from expressing what I have to say.

Chorus:
A person's skin does not reflect that person's abilities.
A person's sex organ does not give that person extra rights.
A person's sexual preference is none of our business
Give up the labels or get ready to fight!

I do not judge people based on society,
I judge people based on content.
Some people think that a person's sexuality
is a good oppurtunity for them to vent!
Fuck that!

I'm going to say what I want to say
and nobody is going to stop me.
If you do try to get in my way,
I will steal your motherfuckin' car keys!

Chorus

Come on Motherfuckers,
Give peace a chance!!!!!

[youngerformofaxl]

Title: Through My Veins
Start Date: 12/24/2003.
End Date: 9/22/2004.
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Telling myself I was destined,
Telling myself I coulden't be bested.
I got lost in the hype
but I knew I wasn't ever ripe.
I don't remember what made me fall
or what stopped them from killin' me in the halls.
But, I remember what he said
and I remember what they read.

So many lives I've touched,
So many lives I've fucked.
So many times I've made it,
So many times I've faked it!

Chorus:
You don't know what I've been thru
to be able to get to you.
You woulden't believe what I've been thru
to get through to you...
I'll see you on the otherside

I use to say I had finally seen it
but now, I see I had missed it.
I wasted my time on the stupidest things
that didn't bring me back anything.
I told you I loved you
but, I ended up hating you.
Now, you've found yourself a man
and all I can do is believe I can.

Pre-Chorus
Chorus

Pain, in a place so deep,
I thought I'd suffocate.
On a journey so steep,
I thought I'd might vacate.
But, then another voice entered my head
as he spoke truth thru my veins.
And, all the while I was in my bed
looking out at the rain.
Now, I have to continue my journey
so I'll see you when I get to the otherside.

[youngerformofaxl]

Title: Spikes.
Start Date: December 2003.
Finish Date: 8/25/2004.
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You are the only one that knows
how I feel when I need somebody.
You are the only one that glows
when I don't get along with anybody.
I've been suffering
& I've been crawling
to find myself back where I started
and even more broken-hearted.
I wish I could've told you my feelings
about how I really was willing.

You are the only guy I like to be around
because of our history together.
Whether I head up or down,
I will remember you forever.
I've been motivated
and I've been driven
to bring truth to people's eyes
but now they believe a bunch of lies.
I wish I could've told them my feelings
about how I really was healing.

Sometimes, you're in my wet dreams
and you show me how it could be.
It's so real to me & it seems
like you'll actually be lying next to me.

I think a lot on my walks to get food
and I watch for your car everytime.
I know sometimes you're just not in the mood
but I still believe I'm on your mind.
I've been hiding
& living inside
so I haven't ever told you
but from somewhere deep, I still love you.

[youngerformofaxl]

Title: Prediction.
Start Date: September 2003.
Finish Date: 9/22/2004.
-----

I'm succeeding at my game
in order to give life to my name.
So much better than I used to be
but so far from who I could be.
Stabilizing my modes
as I continue down this road.
I want to improve my communication
so I can take over this motherfucking nation!!!!

Chorus:
I keep going down this lane
growing & building a giant plane
and when I'm done, I'll leave. (repeat)

Rising up the ladder
doing only what matters
to make myself happy
even if it means taking a nappy.
Clearing the self-destruction
and making my way for clear resolution.
I can see my vision
and it's never been more clear.

Chorus

[youngerformofaxl]

Title: No Where To Go
7/21/2004
-----

She's let an animal into the house.

Trash is what they bring,
Trash is what they get.
Imagine I have to listen to him sing
Imagine him throwing a fucking fit!

I have nothing to show
for the progress I've made.
I have nowhere to go
so I have to turn to where I get paid.

I want to resort to violence,
I want to run away from here.
I've had enough of the disturbances
and I will move away from here.

I hate the bugs, I hate the trash.
I hate the drugs, I hate the clash.

Me & you used to have a connection
but now we can't stand each other.
Perhaps, you need a little direction
don't you remember, I'm your brother.

I have turned to regression
to ease my agression.
While the others are waiting for me to break
I am just trying to wait.

I want to resort to violence,
I want to run away from here.
I've had enough of the disturbances
and I will move away from here.

[youngerformofaxl]

Title: Medieval
Start Date: 7/7/2004
End Date: 7/27/2004
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Our side is ready to fight
and we have your castle in sight.
You better surrender
before I blast your gender.

We've been fighting for days
and it's funny in a way
because we didn't plan this out,
it just happened when we were ready to shout.

It's not a matter of quanity,
It's a matter of quality.
We're winning because we're smarter,
We're winning because we're tougher.

Now that your castle has fallen,
Don't you dare come back crawlin!
If you do make it all the way back,
I will stab you in your sack.

Tell the family & kids: I'll be comin' back home,
So they don't have to lose anymore hope.
I knew we would be crowned the victorious ones
because put simply, we have a lot more fun.

[youngerformofaxl]

Title: Thunder
Start Date: 4/12/2004
End Date: 8/23/2004
-----

Sometimes, I think back to what happened
and I can't believe how it all went down.
One day I was having a good day campin'
and the next I was being mobbed down-town.
There are a lot of things I want to say,
There are a lot of things I want to explain.
But, everytime I try it my way,
it all comes out the same.
So let me try it once more:

Chorus:
I'm sorry for what I did.
I'm sorry for what I wrote.
I'm sorry If I influenced the kids.
I'm sorry if you had to change your vote.
All I ever wanted was a hug.

I hear thunder off to the distance
like the sound of your voice.
I hate to ignore it since
I have a goddam choice.
There are a lot of things I left out
but you never gave a fuck anyways.
Maybe, If I didn't have to shout,
You could actually hear what I have to say.
But, let me try it once more:

Chorus

I wish I could've known you better
but we're better off without each other.
So, the next time you start thinkin' bout my letter,
Just remember, I'm just another motherfucker.

Chorus (x2)