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« Reply #120 on: February 06, 2004, 09:40:42 PM »

I love it heartathome. And it makes me remember something too. We have all had a magic moment someday and in my case, i hope i'll get to live another one and that it"ll last this time.
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« Reply #121 on: February 07, 2004, 02:54:17 PM »

   Track 4

   Bust-A-Cap

chorus:   bust a cap- life flashing rap,
   murderer on the run, DEAD now - could use a gun
   cause hell is mean, demons scream, fight and ream-
   with terror from below, no rock, no fun no ho's........
   was it worth the hit?, no mo rappin, shit!
   darkness calls, blood-stained halls,  the toughest lack balls........

   Anotha tale from tha hood, up to no good,
   mafucka owes me some skrilla,
   can't believe this shit - don't they know i'm a killa?
   fukn runt, puffin blunts, load my clip, through  shadows i slip, creep up behind - outta my mind,
   chillin with his boys - esteemin their car-toys,
   send ya'll to hell - dead witness ain't gonna tell,
   4 dead bodies in a parking lot, fukn blazing gun still red-hot
   pick up the ho's - not taking any no's,
   still on tha murder high - clothes fly - juices dry,
   5-0 sirens pierce tha dark, showed my teeth - fukn shark
   now i'm on the run, with a gun, hope i see tha sun!,
   hit the clubs one last time, slang some rhyme, on rock, outta my mind
   freestyle for tha club homies, time runnin out - on my knees,
   sirens comin gotta run, ain't packin-shit! gun lackin,
   outta ammo, outta luck, here they come-Fuck!,
   back- alley running , home-posse snitched and ditched,
   stashed AK for the homecrew, last back-stab in lieu
   face some hard time for tha night-crime someone dropped a dime
   cause the cops at my house - screaming kids, pushed spouse,
   flea down the block, in shock, outta stock-need more rock,
   old lady's shocked face-other race, jacked her car i'm goin far,
   bright city lights crack the night, tearing away no time to stay,
   red light slip  - cop lights rip - fucked, now the scales tipped
   over the bridge or back to jail? fuck the slammer hop the rail!

chorus:   bust a cap- life flashing rap,
   murderer on the run, DEAD now - could use a gun
   cause hell is mean, demons scream, fight and ream-
   with terror from below, no rock, no fun, no ho's........
   was it worth the hit?, no mo rappin, shit!
   darkness calls, blood-stained halls,  the toughest lack     ballsssssss.......
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« Reply #122 on: February 07, 2004, 03:26:23 PM »

I love it heartathome. And it makes me remember something too. We have all had a magic moment someday and in my case, i hope i'll get to live another one and that it"ll last this time.
Thank you.  It's like another family here.  But you have to beware.  Smiley It comes from my heart but needs to be re-written on the soft spots.  You know how moods are.
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« Reply #123 on: February 17, 2004, 06:02:44 AM »

Here's something I just wrote, hope you like it. The song is about when there's so many out to please you, but the options, though good also bad, perhaps the song explains itself

on retail

Honey, my hearts is the bargain
And the retail is on
I know it should feel good to be wanted
But that's so far from me

The retail is on
But you can't buy me, even if I'm free

I know we're coming down
I've tried to save it, but I keep hiting a wall

I've tought it over and over for ages
Vision is vivid, I'll get back to you

Honey, my hearts is the bargain
And the retail is on
You can't buy me
tough the prize tag is on

I left you cold hearted
And the retail is on
It feels so good to be wanted
It feels good to be free

Leave a message on the phone
I'll get back at you - on better time

You accuse me of not trying
Honey, If I did't think of us
we would do just fine
Thinking made it bad

Honey, my hearts is the bargain
And the retail is on

Do I need You?
Do You Need Me?
Do We Need This?
Where's The Answers I seek?


There it was, please, tell me what you thought of it.
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« Reply #124 on: February 19, 2004, 08:04:35 AM »

No replies? Guess you must have hated it Wink
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« Reply #125 on: February 20, 2004, 12:47:09 PM »

No replies? Guess you must have hated it Wink

It was good writting, but I thought it was very personal to you.  To understand the personal notion of it, is very complex and new.  Retail,  is genius.  It is very industry.
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« Reply #126 on: February 20, 2004, 01:14:59 PM »

This is a great place to share.  I came here to share a thought...that would make a good poem or song.  

"Where is the end"

I can't wait for my first breath
I've been waiting for sooo long
just to touch you, in my sleep

how can it be a mistake
when everything I do is wrong
It's who we are
and it all comes back to
the first day in time

when the lights go down and I am alone
I pray for you to come to me again
when the lights go down I feel you there with me
the only thing missing is why

I am not like the blonde who caught your eye
I am more complicated, aint it sweet
Don't keep playing with my mind, I'll win everytime

I don't need a partner, I need a friend
I forgive you, if you forgive me
where is the end,  leave the bright lights home
All I need is you and it's causing everyone pain

Last time I saw you, you felt wonder and devine
why do I have to figure out all the lines
cause if it is love, I wouldn't have to put so much time
don't you realize that I need little time to be happy

Not some fucking "here guess" bullshit.
You have drove me nuts, and I am worried still
Tired and still wonder how you are.
I left you a message today.


I don't shop at sears anymore, I love Walmart
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« Reply #127 on: February 21, 2004, 07:29:17 AM »

It was good writting, but I thought it was very personal to you.  To understand the personal notion of it, is very complex and new.  Retail,  is genius.  It is very industry.

Thanks, and  it was quite personal to me and it means a lot that you had the time to post a reply for it. It is a true song.

I read "Where Is The End", actually I had to read it a couple of times Wink

"why do I have to figure out all the lines
cause if it is love, I wouldn't have to put so much time" was excelent
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« Reply #128 on: February 22, 2004, 08:39:31 AM »

i always like making new shit up so I wrote this song: hell's garden


                             hell's garden

   your all alone and noones around you you fell like you don't belong in this fucked up world so go and don't turn around you fell it you fell it your all alone
so ..............................welcome to hell's garden ofhatred on your self hell's garden of hatred on your self

and im working on the rest  peace
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« Reply #129 on: February 24, 2004, 06:17:04 AM »

It's like I am walking in a field of roses
They all look the same
I don't stand out here
and no one calls me by my my name

I look up high, to a voice that once upon a time
called out to me, without a doubt is not here anymore
I have been sleeping forever
You have the best of me
when you took it from me
at the corner of Regent and Beverly

When I said No I won't
I didn't mean it entirely
You knew how I felt back then
And you took my freedom away from me

Days went bye and you had to know
that I was just the one for you
I frooze in time and now I am living in your hell

So don't feel alone, and don't worry
you got me baby, everyday I can tell
Take away the mansion, take away the pain
what you've got left here, is a little girl waiting for you

waiting for you to make it clear
I may not understand, I may not act right
All I know is that I am alone tonight
where is the garden that I once was so safe
they took it away, One lonely night

So we all meet there now and then
I can tell you, I never see my friend
cause he's off with the show now and I don't think
I'll ever be right again.

with fucked up love.
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« Reply #130 on: February 25, 2004, 05:05:01 AM »

I'll try not to spam Cheesy

I wrote this kind of "after the storm", feeling bad and fucked up, ?cos sometimes it just seems there has to be the one who you can blame ? me. The song is about you being blamed and "painted", like when she keeps talking to your friends, and they getting only on side of it all. Oh, and a big part is her not letting go easy, but, well, needing to get some payback. And finally, some friends are there for you and some don?t. Eventually it's about moving on and not giving up.

 
At The Final Line

 
We've walked a long time
though not so far
We don't anymore walk hand in hand
I-ah

 
Honey, when I said I needed you
It was no lie
But, honey, this time It's no ..
.. way .. oh-..no .. oh.. no .. damned..  way...

 
I know you must think to me it's just "go"
Even If I'm off the track
Oh, I may need a spare tire
But you just pass me by
You try to put me last on the racetrack


Like any words for me "Just go"
Oh, I think I can see the true color now
Of those that stood with me and of those
who went down


I see your true color now
And you can paint
What do you want of me?
Paint from me?


Oh-ah slap in the face is not what I got
Uh, you want me to hurt you, but I'll hold back
You want me to hurt you ? so you could get me back
 
We walked a thin line and I-ah
I think I can see the true colors now
Peach isn't a color to me
thought of that?
and all wine isn't red
And I knew you'd attack


Like any words for me "Just go"
I know you hate me for that
And the pain I feel
You never thought you could cause all that
--...I never thought you...---

 <possible solo>

After a week I'll feel fine
Then I'll meet you one final time
At the final line
And I'm back on the track

Like any word "just go"
just words for me
And I know you say it was all me
You perfect bitch
 

Let me know what you thought of it, thanks ok?
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« Reply #131 on: March 06, 2004, 01:20:56 AM »

It is a perfect crime.

how two people can be so wrong for eachother.

It is so... to finally hear a breath of past life and look into a present.
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Thank you. Blue.

Very inspiring,  I will sleep well enough to dream.

angels, please follow.

I have to try pot again.  
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« Reply #132 on: March 10, 2004, 09:50:37 AM »

Tell me what you guys think of this okay please?

?Yeah It?s You?


What was it you once said that made me believe
How far did you come up from below
Did you feel relieved when you knew you wouldn?t drown
How I never left without you, only to be found lying face down

When I talk do I sound hollow to you
As I leave your presence does it bother you
When I want to be important does it work
As I leave your presence do you follow

Tonight the sun will fall and night will begin
Stars are the light along with the moon
I hope I can spend this time with you very soon
Tonight I?ll think of you and stay so alone

Waiting to see you next is long indeed
It?s so long it makes me want to bleed
I hope waiting for something is right
I hate to fight and love is always in my eyes something bright

Taking away so much away from nothing it hard to do
I deep down always miss you
Someday we?ll be together for now we?re apart
I hope you know this is really hitting my heart

Sorry this is so long
I know I can?t keep you forever
I?ll go now, hope you miss me, it would be nice
So goodbye love, I?ll see you soon

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« Reply #133 on: March 10, 2004, 10:00:44 AM »

No matter what you say, this is where it belongs.
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« Reply #134 on: March 10, 2004, 10:10:59 AM »

OKay thank you, for having this power trip and all...
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« Reply #135 on: March 10, 2004, 10:50:43 AM »

OKay thank you, for having this power trip and all...


Yeah, it's all about power trips.... We just move, merge and stuff just to show our power.

Get real.  Roll Eyes


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« Reply #136 on: March 10, 2004, 11:57:58 AM »

Lastnight

I had an encounter with the higher power last night
after he gave me the will to survive
I realized that, love still lives here in me

After being told that there is only one kind of love
and after I relived the feeling you made me feel
I swear I saw you with me

Only Love can touch me that wa?
Thank God he is watching over me
Cause I don't know what I am capable of
these days, ya, these days
er
I am watching the light on the wall
the reflection from my window at night
spells, L
I don't know why I can't be with with
He didn't tell me.

I don't know why I can't be with you
I guess waiting for me to die and in the morning
arise with me in your arms

I felt love once, yesterday It came back'
so that would make it twice, but I still don't have you
How many days do I have to live without you

The sign on my wall spells L and I am dreaming
that L means you and not just a lonely night again
I felt love yesterday, thank God for signs on my wall

Cause I need to know that there is light
even in the night, even if I don't have you
Please believe me, Cause I only fell in love once
it's still on my wall tonight.

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« Reply #137 on: March 10, 2004, 02:04:50 PM »

Tell me what you guys think of this okay please?

?Yeah It?s You?


What was it you once said that made me believe
How far did you come up from below
Did you feel relieved when you knew you wouldn?t drown
How I never left without you, only to be found lying face down

When I talk do I sound hollow to you
As I leave your presence does it bother you
When I want to be important does it work
As I leave your presence do you follow

Tonight the sun will fall and night will begin
Stars are the light along with the moon
I hope I can spend this time with you very soon
Tonight I?ll think of you and stay so alone

Waiting to see you next is long indeed
It?s so long it makes me want to bleed
I hope waiting for something is right
I hate to fight and love is always in my eyes something bright

Taking away so much away from nothing it hard to do
I deep down always miss you
Someday we?ll be together for now we?re apart
I hope you know this is really hitting my heart

Sorry this is so long
I know I can?t keep you forever
I?ll go now, hope you miss me, it would be nice
So goodbye love, I?ll see you soon

By Robbie Wiles



Very sweet..why do men never say these things in real life ?  yes ok
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« Reply #138 on: March 10, 2004, 02:06:16 PM »

Lastnight

I had an encounter with the higher power last night
after he gave me the will to survive
I realized that, love still lives here in me

After being told that there is only one kind of love
and after I relived the feeling you made me feel
I swear I saw you with me

Only Love can touch me that wa?
Thank God he is watching over me
Cause I don't know what I am capable of
these days, ya, these days
er
I am watching the light on the wall
the reflection from my window at night
spells, L
I don't know why I can't be with with
He didn't tell me.

I don't know why I can't be with you
I guess waiting for me to die and in the morning
arise with me in your arms

I felt love once, yesterday It came back'
so that would make it twice, but I still don't have you
How many days do I have to live without you

The sign on my wall spells L and I am dreaming
that L means you and not just a lonely night again
I felt love yesterday, thank God for signs on my wall

Cause I need to know that there is light
even in the night, even if I don't have you
Please believe me, Cause I only fell in love once
it's still on my wall tonight.



Love it, inspiring..I guess that love is something we all think about and relate to.
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« Reply #139 on: March 11, 2004, 01:57:41 AM »

Lastnight

I had an encounter with the higher power last night
after he gave me the will to survive
I realized that, love still lives here in me

After being told that there is only one kind of love
and after I relived the feeling you made me feel
I swear I saw you with me

Only Love can touch me that wa?
Thank God he is watching over me
Cause I don't know what I am capable of
these days, ya, these days
er
I am watching the light on the wall
the reflection from my window at night
spells, L
I don't know why I can't be with with
He didn't tell me.

I don't know why I can't be with you
I guess waiting for me to die and in the morning
arise with me in your arms

I felt love once, yesterday It came back'
so that would make it twice, but I still don't have you
How many days do I have to live without you

The sign on my wall spells L and I am dreaming
that L means you and not just a lonely night again
I felt love yesterday, thank God for signs on my wall

Cause I need to know that there is light
even in the night, even if I don't have you
Please believe me, Cause I only fell in love once
it's still on my wall tonight.



Love it, inspiring..I guess that love is something we all think about and relate to.

you bet.
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