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[GunsKillPeople502]

"Jointsucker"

Wake up at noon today
Make up my mind about the day
Drug up my head all the way
I know the world is gay

[Chorus]
I have never felt so high
I have never hoped to die
Jointsucker...
Mindfucker...
Jointsucker...

Off to work, to the grind
Smoked myself beyond my mind
Probably get stoned again
Give me it, I need a friend

[Chorus]

[Guitar Solo]

I never meant to get so fucked
I guess right now I'm out of luck

[Chorus]

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This is my first post, hell yeah.

[MoonMax]

"Jointsucker"

Wake up at noon today
Make up my mind about the day
Drug up my head all the way
I know the world is gay

[Chorus]
I have never felt so high
I have never hoped to die
Jointsucker...
Mindfucker...
Jointsucker...

Off to work, to the grind
Smoked myself beyond my mind
Probably get stoned again
Give me it, I need a friend

[Chorus]

[Guitar Solo]

I never meant to get so fucked
I guess right now I'm out of luck

[Chorus]

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This is my first post, hell yeah.

 

[Sin Cut]

I hope to get some feedbaack on this one

There was this festival Rockperry, and my ex shows up and starts telling these stories about me to my wokrmates. It really damaged my mood, and then it was like over, I've been nice to her everytime we see, asking how she's doing and been for help where I can. Now, I don't care, get bunred and fucked over, isn't my problem!

And here's the song

"all that pleases you"


Honey, things had to end
There was so much I couldn't bear
Yeah, baby, I wish we could be as friends
But when I left you it must've drove you insane

Yeah, I hurt you and you
You lied about me to everyone
So proud about it
Yeah, I know you are

I try to avoid you
But you gotta be where I am
Yeah, isn't it a disgrace?!
And you still love me
What would you give to hold me?
So you could let me fall
I know you want to hurt me
From the bottom of your heart

Isn't it a trying to you?
Being such a bitch
Wouldn't you kill
to see my in a ditch?

You lied to everyone
so proud about it!
Yeah, I know you are!

I never thought I'd say
Of someone I loved the other day
The world would be a better place
If you'd be gone
Yeah, isn't it a disgrace?
You got a witches brain and a cold heart
Isn't it a phase of your vicious mind?
Isn't your mission to make me leave mankind?

It's hard to believe how it got this far
But I can see, how much it pleases you

[MoonMax]

Damm, I don't know, why it didn't appear, what I wanted to say.

So, I just wanted to say to Jointsucker author, that this lyrics realy rocks.

Thanks

MM

[D]

this is a song from the "D" vaults i wrote it april 8th 1999 its called

DENIAL, its sort of half spoken half sung


sometimes i sit around,wondering why i feel so down
does anyone else feel like me? or am i the only one who is crazy


sometimes i sit and talk to myself
sometimes id rather talk to me than anyone else
sometimes im afraid of everything im scared to die scared of change

why cant things ever stay the same
when i get at peace everything starts to change
sometimes i wonder if ill ever be ok
sometimes i feel like i wont make it another day

what is the reason 4 life? when we are just born to die
why is the world evil and mean? happiness always bows to sorrow and misery


poem half spoken,rapped and sung

the depths of my soul are filled with fire
i wish i could be something everyone admired
how come some people are blessed with fortune and fame
why some are homeless goin down in flames
why are some people born with a silver spoon
growin up with so much privledge andmoney they never lose
some of us have nothing and are filled with sorrow and doubt, we dont have a pot to piss in or window to throw it out

this world gives u nothing
but ii takes away your soul
this world gives u nothing
but it slowly robs u of your soul


poem spoken  


we all stand dead waiting to be born
all our wasted life u said will never be to scorn

why i have i led the life i lead
why do i always mourn
its simple needs i cant be dead to love again once more

shame to those who said they begged to be loved again once more
before they loathed the life they led can never be foreclosed

so now i stand where all have begged
to be loved again once more

now i stand my love is dead
ill never be adored

[D]

had i finished my cd 3 years ago this song wouldve been on it and been a potential big gun, now it doesnt even make the record, but read and tell me what u think


                      IF I WAS A FIGHTER  i wrote this in 1996 at the tender age of 17



i always run when it comes to love
i get so scared i always give up
im so shy i got nothin to say
then they always leave they walk away... they walk away

u go off find somebody new, im left here just missin u
and there is nothing that i can do.... but if i was a fighter u'd love me 2

my nights are lonely and my days are gray sittin here thinkin of things to say
i can make believe pretend your not taken
but when i think of u myheart is breakin my heart is breakin whoa whoa
chorus:
if i was a fighter, if i was a fighter, if i was a fighter i wouldnt run in the middle of this war i couldnt stand u not lovin me anymoreeeeeee if i was a fighter..... if i was a fighter i wouldnt run in the middle of this war

tell me what i gotta do to win u
cause u dont know what ive been thru
i admit i cry thinkin of the past
when we were together but it didnt last.. it didnt last

u always play a game and i always lose
i dont know what im suppose to do
my feelings are still so strong
and if i was a fighter i wouldnt be alone

everytime u walk by i just fall apart
i keep feelin the pain of my broken heart
i can imagine i can try to deny the fact youre the reason for the tears i cry, 4 the tears i cry, oh yeah

repeat chorus

i wouldnt run, id always be there, whenever u need me, id always care and baby if u would only love me let me be yours... if u believed

if i was a fighter... if i was a fighter, if i was a fighter i wouldnt run in the middle of this war

[Sin Cut]

had i finished my cd 3 years ago this song wouldve been on it and been a potential big gun, now it doesnt even make the record, but read and tell me what u think


                      IF I WAS A FIGHTER  i wrote this in 1996 at the tender age of 17



i always run when it comes to love
i get so scared i always give up
im so shy i got nothin to say
then they always leave they walk away... they walk away

u go off find somebody new, im left here just missin u
and there is nothing that i can do.... but if i was a fighter u'd love me 2

my nights are lonely and my days are gray sittin here thinkin of things to say
i can make believe pretend your not taken
but when i think of u myheart is breakin my heart is breakin whoa whoa
chorus:
if i was a fighter, if i was a fighter, if i was a fighter i wouldnt run in the middle of this war i couldnt stand u not lovin me anymoreeeeeee if i was a fighter..... if i was a fighter i wouldnt run in the middle of this war

tell me what i gotta do to win u
cause u dont know what ive been thru
i admit i cry thinkin of the past
when we were together but it didnt last.. it didnt last

u always play a game and i always lose
i dont know what im suppose to do
my feelings are still so strong
and if i was a fighter i wouldnt be alone

everytime u walk by i just fall apart
i keep feelin the pain of my broken heart
i can imagine i can try to deny the fact youre the reason for the tears i cry, 4 the tears i cry, oh yeah

repeat chorus

i wouldnt run, id always be there, whenever u need me, id always care and baby if u would only love me let me be yours... if u believed

if i was a fighter... if i was a fighter, if i was a fighter i wouldnt run in the middle of this war

D.. I gotta say I really liked it, just something for my mood today, it was good, thanks for posting.

[GunsKillPeople502]

"Sold Soul"

I sold my soul so I could rock and roll...
I sold my life so I'll never get old...
I sold myself so I could get ahead...
I sold my life so I'll never be dead...

This is getting old, old, old
My life has been sold, sold, sold
You all have been told...
My soul's been sold!

I sold my person so that I could win...
I sold my guns for a bottle of gin...
I sold my face so I could be a winner...
I sold my soul to the devil and now I'm a sinner...

This is getting old, old, old
My life has been sold, sold, sold
You all have been told...
My soul's been sold!

[Guitar solo]

I sold my friends so I could be alone...
I sold my shit, everything I own...
I sold my gear, to get it back I had to plead...
I sold my crack, in order to get some weed...

This is getting old, old, old
My life's been sold, sold, sold
You've all been told...
My soul's been sold!(sold!)
My soul's been sold!(sold!)
My soul is empty now...
My soul's been sold!

[miau]

I would like to know any opinions on these lyrics I recently wrote:

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a spine bone that's twisting
a restlessly rambling limb
a muscle tired of resting
a mind bored as well as numb

my skin is branding my forehead
with symptoms I can't name
stoned eyes - and all's been said
I've a pleasure I can't tame

an hour that's dragging by
a day full of languor
I ain't got time to wait and lie
no passion for a rambler

this isn't what you wanted?
this isn't your lifelong dream?
is your mind that demented?
your eyes have lost that gleam?

baby make do with what ya got
don't let your hunger go to waste
what's the use to doubt and rot
get up you'll surely get the gist
soon enough

my legs they know the routes to take
those I learned from God long ago
I'm attending my own anguished wake
when my glass's empty I gotta go

baby make do with what ya got
don't let your hunger go to waste
what's the use to doubt and rot
get up you'll surely get the gist
soon enough

[youngerformofaxl]

It's okay but it's not something I will call catchy. In other words, it doesn't sound radio-friendly.

[ChristineP]

I hope to get some feedbaack on this one

There was this festival Rockperry, and my ex shows up and starts telling these stories about me to my wokrmates. It really damaged my mood, and then it was like over, I've been nice to her everytime we see, asking how she's doing and been for help where I can. Now, I don't care, get bunred and fucked over, isn't my problem!

And here's the song

"all that pleases you"


Honey, things had to end
There was so much I couldn't bear
Yeah, baby, I wish we could be as friends
But when I left you it must've drove you insane

Yeah, I hurt you and you
You lied about me to everyone
So proud about it
Yeah, I know you are

I try to avoid you
But you gotta be where I am
Yeah, isn't it a disgrace?!
And you still love me
What would you give to hold me?
So you could let me fall
I know you want to hurt me
From the bottom of your heart

Isn't it a trying to you?
Being such a bitch
Wouldn't you kill
to see my in a ditch?

You lied to everyone
so proud about it!
Yeah, I know you are!

I never thought I'd say
Of someone I loved the other day
The world would be a better place
If you'd be gone
Yeah, isn't it a disgrace?
You got a witches brain and a cold heart
Isn't it a phase of your vicious mind?
Isn't your mission to make me leave mankind?

It's hard to believe how it got this far
But I can see, how much it pleases you

BC...Very cool..You should try to put some tune to your stuff, I can feel what/where yopur going...You do play guitar or a friend?

[Sin Cut]

ChristineP, I play guitar and sure I have some simple tune and I'm trying to make some music, but it's not my strong point. Oh, well... I've played only for a four months or so maybe I'm still getting there

Here's another song, hopefully there'll be some feedback 

"Dive in the ditch, bitch"


I'm packin' up my stuff, it's time to go
It's time to go, here life's never gonna be rich
Done my livin', done my living in the ditch
No losing grips since there's just one story, one bitch
One story for every glory loving that bitch

Yeah, time to go, to shine an' show
Yeah, done my livin' low, so give me a pack of smokes
and some lunch to go
Yeah, time to go, to shine an' show
the faster I'm gone, the faster is the switch
an' the losing taste of that final kiss
Losing that and the twisted witch

Last of my dimes, alone in my pocket
some sorry dimes, my unsupportive cheerleader crowd
not enough for anything, kinda like you, honey
What happened to you honey?

I'm packin' up my stuff, it's time to go
It's time to go, here life's never gonna go on
Done my livin' low, done my diving in the ditch
No losing grips since there's just one story, one bitch
One story for every glory loving that bitch

Whoa, baby, who you calling a heartbreaker?
Whoa, baby  cursing me the worst you can
Some fame and glory, cursing up every story
Some fame and stories, like the ending of your glories
Bitch!

Yeah, time to go, to shine an' show
Someone lit my smoke and I'll be gone
No emotion swings to go an' break it
No emotion stings, since I left it
And no more bitch, no more shit!
Be tight lipped now an' sleep in the ditch
Your wings are cut, find someone rich
Be tight lipped, bitch, enjoy your time in the ditch
An' your wings are cut, find someone rich

Bitch.

[Brufri]

Here is a song of mine. Take note that English is not my primarily language, so there may be some mispelled words.

THIS I LOVE

I hear you call my name
Echoing like a whisper
Bringing back asleep memories
Embedded in a past full of lies

Windows crack outside
Announcing the haunted season
Its cooling slowly inside
My whole is left behind

And nothing could keep me
Away from this room
Im falling to pieces
And lost without you
Surrounded by darkness
All over my mind
I wish I could see you
Just one last time

Let me show you
What it means to be alone
When the loneliness
Corrode your heart to death
Deep inside me
Is the pain that carries me on
Cause this feeling for you
Keep getting stronger this I love
This I love
This I love
This I love...

[ChristineP]

ChristineP, I play guitar and sure I have some simple tune and I'm trying to make some music, but it's not my strong point. Oh, well... I've played only for a four months or so maybe I'm still getting there

Here's another song, hopefully there'll be some feedback?

"Dive in the ditch, bitch"


I'm packin' up my stuff, it's time to go
It's time to go, here life's never gonna be rich
Done my livin', done my living in the ditch
No losing grips since there's just one story, one bitch
One story for every glory loving that bitch

Yeah, time to go, to shine an' show
Yeah, done my livin' low, so give me a pack of smokes
and some lunch to go
Yeah, time to go, to shine an' show
the faster I'm gone, the faster is the switch
an' the losing taste of that final kiss
Losing that and the twisted witch

Last of my dimes, alone in my pocket
some sorry dimes, my unsupportive cheerleader crowd
not enough for anything, kinda like you, honey
What happened to you honey?

I'm packin' up my stuff, it's time to go
It's time to go, here life's never gonna go on
Done my livin' low, done my diving in the ditch
No losing grips since there's just one story, one bitch
One story for every glory loving that bitch

Whoa, baby, who you calling a heartbreaker?
Whoa, baby? cursing me the worst you can
Some fame and glory, cursing up every story
Some fame and stories, like the ending of your glories
Bitch!

Yeah, time to go, to shine an' show
Someone lit my smoke and I'll be gone
No emotion swings to go an' break it
No emotion stings, since I left it
And no more bitch, no more shit!
Be tight lipped now an' sleep in the ditch
Your wings are cut, find someone rich
Be tight lipped, bitch, enjoy your time in the ditch
An' your wings are cut, find someone rich

Bitch.

  I sure wouldn't want to piss you off!!!!!

[Jesse James]

this is a song I wrote for a girl I met this summer and I think I fell for her

its called Your Eyes And The Summer Night


a fallin star just travelled through the sky
I closed my eyes and felt my heartbeat
I had this feeling, it came right from your eyes
and that I was meant to find it

So if you ever see yourself a falling star
close your eyes and feel your heartbeat
and you will know just how I felt that night
that night I'd give my all to ride it

to ride to you sipping some Jack on ice
to ride it back to your eyes

If I ever get the chance to meet you in my life again
I hope I have the strength to tell you what I felt
and then just be one of those falling stars that travel through the summer sky
cause your eyes defined the meaning of the summer night


your eyes defined the meaning of the summer night
your eyes defined the meaning of the summer night

[Sin Cut]

I sure wouldn't want to piss you off!!!!!

Was it that bad?  Don't worry, you won't

[Mattman]

This song I had in my mind for a while - basically the lament of a sexually frustrated teenager, and an indictment of social views that make women apprehensive of having sex.  I don't know if the final results are as good as I'd hoped, but I think the lyrics are alright.  The song sounds a bit like "A Forest" by The Cure - an icy, gloomy sound.

By the way, I'm pleased to tell you that since I wrote the song a few weeks ago, I have since gotten laid!!  So it's more of a historical curiosity now.  Whatever, enjoy.

The Virgin Suicides

Take a walk through the fabled garden
She waits there and laughs at your devil's bargain
Open your eyes, you're too blind to see
That you and I were meant to be

The serpent instructs you to taste the fruit
It's what you've been told nice girls don't do
You take a thing of beauty and you make it obscene
I'm bowing as a slave to the Virgin Queen

Just realize before it's too late
It's a gesture of love you turned into hate
You want to get rid of this parasite
Driving me to my suicide, oh yeah

[Wheres Izzy]

these are the lyrics to 2 songs I wrote during the summer for the band I was in. Nothing serious, we played the park by my house and it was just for a good time before everyone went back to school. I would love to hear thoughts on them tho.
By the way, I listened to alot of aerosmith over the summer so if the lyrics are very wanna be steven tyler you know why....
GOING BLIND

marijuana's for glaucoma should I take it 'cause I can't take you
The way you move your ass my hearts not the only part of me turning blue
I'm in danger 'cause my angel's the one leading me to sin
forearm exercises your finish line is where I begin
My thoughts are dirty but your eyes aren't cause I make you cry
You're sayin that you lvoe me but all I want is between your thighs

:Yeah and I'm goin blind-whats a libido to do?
Yeah and I'm goin blind-that's why I shouldn't see you:

Can't stand much more that's why I'm on my knees pleadin
Got you on my couch and then I get to plotting and sheming
standing at your door and the rain starts pouring down cold
I wanna knock and cum inside but you're still saying no

:yeah and I'm goin blind-behavior I can't condone
Yeah and I'm going blind-I guess I'll stumble on home:

BIG WHITE TELEPHONE

You say you just want to be friends I'm saying that won't be fair
You get to have all the things you want and I get is to be there
I remember holding your hair back-talkin to god on the big white telephone
Now that you're gone everythings wrong and I'm drinkin here all alone
Chorous:
To have loved and have lost-you're not better off as they say
and if you can't be here-than I wish that you would just go away

I found alotta girls to take your place 15 minutes at a time
But how could it be anything else when you're always on the other line
I won't ever be the bigger person so don't expect me to be mature
keep calling me on my idiosyncrasies just don't call my phone anymore
chorous

[Jessica]

"Sold Soul"

I sold my soul so I could rock and roll...
I sold my life so I'll never get old...
I sold myself so I could get ahead...
I sold my life so I'll never be dead...

This is getting old, old, old
My life has been sold, sold, sold
You all have been told...
My soul's been sold!

I sold my person so that I could win...
I sold my guns for a bottle of gin...
I sold my face so I could be a winner...
I sold my soul to the devil and now I'm a sinner...

This is getting old, old, old
My life has been sold, sold, sold
You all have been told...
My soul's been sold!

[Guitar solo]

I sold my friends so I could be alone...
I sold my shit, everything I own...
I sold my gear, to get it back I had to plead...
I sold my crack, in order to get some weed...

This is getting old, old, old
My life's been sold, sold, sold
You've all been told...
My soul's been sold!(sold!)
My soul's been sold!(sold!)
My soul is empty now...
My soul's been sold!

I really like this one.

[N.I.B]

Please let me know what you think and please make suggestions how to make it better.
Thanks.

Sick world of Bliss (Fallen Stars)

Walk across the starry night.
Touch the star while in flight.
The fallen stars burn anew.
Soon, you will burn too.

Amazing what your mind can become.
A twisted world with all senses gone.
A little help from a friend,
And soon your reality will soon be dead.

Pick up the pieces of a broken bottle, blood flows from your wrists.
In some sick way, the poisoned mind you possess finds bliss.
The stars appear no more, they have faded from view.
And soon you will join them, and burn anew.
Nothing gained.

Amazing what your mind can become.
A twisted world with all senses gone.
A little help from a friend,
And soon your reality will soon be dead.

I can touch the sky.
While my world flows right on by.
I begin to fall.
I am nothing at all.

Your friends did try to help.
But you were lost within yourself.
Look at the pleasure you yourself did construct.
Before you turned and self-destructed.

Amazing what your mind can become.
A twisted world with all senses gone.
A little help from a friend,
And soon your reality will soon be dead.

Amazing what your mind can become.
A twisted world with all senses gone.
A little help from a friend,
And soon your reality will soon be dead.