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[IndiannaRose]

im sorry, but are you actualy singing "while you be ringing with the bell" ?

I suppose that's bad....

[IndiannaRose]

Wanted Dead or Alive was a bit.... , I replaced it with Patience instead. Although I still think You Could Be Mine is quite good though.

[crazejosh]

what the hell did i just listen too? Sounds like axl needs to drop a duece

[Skeba]

Wanted Dead or Alive was a bit.... , I replaced it with Patience instead. Although I still think You Could Be Mine is quite good though.

I downloaded the Patience also. It's a lot better than either of the others, but Axl's voice is too loud in this one, so I'm hearing him most of the time. Still don't think it's all that good. Sorry.

[N.I.B]

Sry but its not that good. Its alright i though You could be mine was ok but....sry man

[Jaded]

did you sing/perform them?

[Dont Try Me]

I listened to them and here's how I view them.

You Could be Mine:

1. Why so much vibrato in your voice, It sounds like a bad combination of Iron Maiden and Axl. It doesn't suit this part at all.
2. It's totally out of pace
3. Just try to do it at normal speed. It sounds like you are despiratly trying to get out"Axl's voice". But the harder you try the more UN-natural it sounds and the worser it gets. It seems like you are trying way too much and that causes the sloppy outbring of the lyrics as well.
4. I want you to re-record this. I think you could do ALLOT better if you take some advice from the above points.

Patience:

1. The whistle is way off-key and sounds very fragile.
3. I can't hear your voice.
4. I don't know.

Overall:

- Try listen to the originals better before you try to record it or sing it. Take your time to listen to "how" axl does the whistle for instance and practise bit by bit.
- You don't have to come close to Axl's sound coz you either have that or not. Just do it in your own voice if it doesn't seem to work.
- Now when I hear your version of You Could Be Mine I hear maybe, just maybe some potentional. Re-record it and do it right. You can do it way better then what I've heard I'm sure.
- I may sound like an ass but I'm only trying to help you

[IndiannaRose]

Well the real reason it's out of pace is because I used Windows Sound Recorder. If you don't know what this is, it's one of those free softwares that makes you press the 'record' button every minute or it will stop recording. I don't know the lyrics to the rapping part of You Could Be Mine very well so while I was singing, I had to look at the time, while looking at the lyrics, while having my hand on the 'record' buton....at the same time. I'm gonna look for better software to record myself where I don't have to do all this. I was just basically singing to my laptop, I'll get better stuff to do it in. Thanx for the honest and long review, that's what I wanted all along. I'll come back stronger and wiser, but hey I'm only 14 ( that doesn't matter though)...

Also about the whole 'Axl voice' thing. That's just one of the ways I can sing. Actually I got this from listening to Def Leppard. From ages 11-13 all I did was listen to Def Leppard, so I sung to Joe Elliot everyday. He also has a raspy voice. So I just took Joe's voice and intertwined it into my own. Trust me I'm not 'trying' to sing like Axl, I was already singing like that before I even listened to GN'R. It's my own, I'm not trying to copy Axl's deuce. That's just the way it is...

[Dont Try Me]

Well the real reason it's out of pace is because I used Windows Sound Recorder. If you don't know what this is, it's one of those free softwares that makes you press the 'record' button every minute or it will stop recording. I don't know the lyrics to the rapping part of You Could Be Mine very well so while I was singing, I had to look at the time, while looking at the lyrics, while having my hand on the 'record' buton....at the same time. I'm gonna look for better software to record myself where I don't have to do all this. I was just basically singing to my laptop, I'll get better stuff to do it in. Thanx for the honest and long review, that's what I wanted all along. I'll come back stronger and wiser, but hey I'm only 14 ( that doesn't matter though)...

Also about the whole 'Axl voice' thing. That's just one of the ways I can sing. Actually I got this from listening to Def Leppard. From ages 11-13 all I did was listen to Def Leppard, so I sung to Joe Elliot everyday. He also has a raspy voice. So I just took Joe's voice and intertwined it into my own. Trust me I'm not 'trying' to sing like Axl, I was already singing like that before I even listened to GN'R. It's my own, I'm not trying to copy Axl's deuce. That's just the way it is...

ok, that's cool. rock on!! 

[Oddy]

Well the real reason it's out of pace is because I used Windows Sound Recorder. If you don't know what this is, it's one of those free softwares that makes you press the 'record' button every minute or it will stop recording. I don't know the lyrics to the rapping part of You Could Be Mine very well so while I was singing, I had to look at the time, while looking at the lyrics, while having my hand on the 'record' buton....at the same time. I'm gonna look for better software to record myself where I don't have to do all this. I was just basically singing to my laptop, I'll get better stuff to do it in. Thanx for the honest and long review, that's what I wanted all along. I'll come back stronger and wiser, but hey I'm only 14 ( that doesn't matter though)...

Also about the whole 'Axl voice' thing. That's just one of the ways I can sing. Actually I got this from listening to Def Leppard. From ages 11-13 all I did was listen to Def Leppard, so I sung to Joe Elliot everyday. He also has a raspy voice. So I just took Joe's voice and intertwined it into my own. Trust me I'm not 'trying' to sing like Axl, I was already singing like that before I even listened to GN'R. It's my own, I'm not trying to copy Axl's deuce. That's just the way it is...

hahahha windows recorder, i do that with guitar too.

see i know a trick. record something for 60 seconds, anything it doesnt matter. no press ctrl + c, then ctrl +v and it will paste that 60 seconds again and again til you have like 6 minutes or however much you need. then just record over it

[Skeba]

Why don't you get something like Goldwave so you really wouldn't have to worry about shit like that. It's not big and is a shareware program if I remember correctly

[Jesse James]

try using your own voice instead

[IndiannaRose]

try using your own voice instead

That is my voice, I sang like that even before I knew GN'R. That's just the way it is. (which happens to be kinda like Axl's)

[Dont Try Me]

This is my demo and a final version of Red House by Jimi Hendrix. You can find those on this site:

http://members.lycos.nl/chineseblues/downloads.html

"Red House" - right click save as

I hope you alll like it!

[loretian]

Nice!  You got some chops, man! 

[Dont Try Me]

Nice!? You got some chops, man!?

thnx! 

[Dont Try Me]

Pretty fucking good, man!?

thank you!! Glad you dig it. 

[Wheres Izzy]

I like I like, thats not what improvisation means tho lol

[Rhythm-n-Booze]

very good stuff, wish i could play some of that 

[Aero]

http://www.licklibrary.com/downloads.asp?AREA=LICKLIBRARY

here's a free Red House download just in case you want to upload your version here or just practice with this really cool base !