http://www.scifaiku.com/The SciFaiku Manifestoa declaration of the principles of SciFaiku
established July 1995 SciFaiku is a distinctive and powerful form of expression for science fiction. It packs all the human insight, technology, and vision of the future into a few poignant lines.
SciFaiku is haiku and it is not haiku. It is driven by the inspiration and many of the principles of haiku, but it takes its own direction. It deviates, expands, and frees itself of haiku.
What is SciFaiku?SciFaiku takes its form from contemporary international haiku. A usual poem is 3 lines and contains about 17 syllables. The topic is science fiction. It strives for a directness of expression and beauty in its simplicity. Here is a representative example:
Asteroids collide
without a sound...
We maneuver between fragments. ImmediacyWhile SciFaiku is open to experimentation and flexible in using the rules of its form, it nevertheless draws its inspiration from haiku. As with haiku, a poet strives to convey a sense of immediacy -- to capture a moment, to make readers feel that they are part of a scene. This immediacy might be obtained, for instance, by incorporating words that strike directly at the senses -- sounds, smells, visions... In striving for directness of expression, SciFaiku avoids abstract concepts and metaphors and describes rather than philosophizes. Leave the implications to the reader's imagination:
Digging up an ancient city,
finding the print
of a tennis shoe. MinimalismLike haiku, SciFaiku seeks terseness of expression. It is minimal and elegant. The standard length is 17 syllables. Traditional haiku is composed of 3 lines of 5, 7, and 5 syllables respectively. This is a useful guideline, but need not be followed strictly. More than 17 syllables is permissible if well-motivated. Fewer syllables or fewer lines are appropriate if the poem still successfully conveys a message:
Naked
he sees she isn't human Science FictionTraditional haiku is about nature. SciFaiku is about science fiction. It need not contain elements of nature, though it may.
Traditional haiku contains a season word -- a word which evokes a season, as snow evokes winter or tulips evoke spring. SciFaiku often contains a "science" word that evokes a technology or science-fiction setting: words like space, genetics, robot, or laser. Every poem needs to clearly evoke a science-fiction premise as well as express its own observation of that premise, and this is perhaps the most challenging aspect of writing SciFaiku.
Technical words often involve many syllables, such as teleport, terraform, alien, or supernova. This adds challenge to keeping a poem concise, since there are that many fewer syllables remaining to complete a poem. One such difficult word is "biofeedback":
with biofeedback
to heal the burns:
I flip a burger, nonchalant A few approaches can be taken to deal with this challenge:
-It is acceptable to spill over the limit of 17 syllables, particularly when the subject matter clearly involves a complex technical term (transmogrification -- already 6 syllables), though this should be avoided.
-Seek a substition for a longer word, e.g. droid instead of robot, but don't do this if it seriously reduces clarity or disrupts the mood of a poem.
-Sometimes SciFaiku can be written in a series. The first few can establish the science-fiction premise, which can be merely alluded to in subsequent poems. However, each poem should stand independently if at least the context is known.
Human InsightPerhaps one of the most intriguing aspects of science fiction is how it provides deep insight into the human condition, even when the subject matter is computers or aliens. Not restricting itself only to the tangible, SciFaiku permits an exploration of the thoughts and feelings of characters within a poem:
In a ramjet -- wistfully thinking of you(A Bussard ramjet, or ramscoop, is a spaceship powered by scooping interstellar hydrogen into a fusion reactor -- the implication is that the traveller is on a very long interstellar voyage, perhaps long enough that there is no intention of returning.)
http://www.planetmag.com/sfku.htm (Andrew G. McCann's SciFaiku Page)
Very funny. Some selections:
EXO-ARMOR (FutureWarKu)Batteries are dead
Dawn breaks on the battlefield
Trapped in a barrel
TOLKUINTREPID HOBBIT
(The Council of Elrond Convenes)Behold brave Frodo
Ring-bearer, bound for Mordor
Better him than meSAM'S DARKEST HOUROh, Mr. Frodo!
Sir, watch out for that Gollum!
Cripes, this ain't worth it...BASTARD SAURONThat bastard Sauron
Lording it over us all!
Him and his damn "Eye"SARUMAN'S LAMENTConsider the Orc:
Brutal, fetid, and hairy!
Just like my ex-wifeSARUMAN THE CHEFTurkey bred with Orc
Let's gobble-gobble Goblin!
Where's my spoon 'n' fork?STUPID BREE INKEEPER
FORGOT GANDALF'S MESSAGEOld Barliman says
"One thing drives out another."
That's no excuse, pal!POOR TOMPoor Tom Bombadil
You were cut from the movie
just because you're gayTHE DRAGONAncient, evil Smaug
fire-breathing town-eater
may your farts explode
CORYTHOSAURUS RANCHHow now, brown dino?
Plucked from the late Cretaceous
Who knew? Delicious!SNOWORLD
Rocket flames dwindle
in endless ammonia storms
No more supply shipsIF THIS IS TUESDAY...So this is Day One,
When the Earth coalesces.
How hot. How boring.BEAUTIFUL ACCIDENTDown into Saturn
Golden cliffs spiral upwards.
Diamond windshield cracksLAST-MINUTE NUKE STRIKELast-minute nuke strike
Called off as diplomats meet
At last! War Is Ov-
Anyway that's just a few of 'em. Check out the rest!
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