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Title: So I wrote these lyrix yyh. Post by: Kady.52 on June 24, 2007, 09:25:34 PM So I wrote these lyrics for a song a few weeks ago, tell me what y'all think : ok:
Lonely In America LYRICS: K J?AIN MUSIC: J?AIN/VENDETTA Don?t you know why I?m waiting? Whisky bottle in hand, At a cold, grey station; In a foreign land. My head humming loud with Rock n? roll rhythm, and blues My lone ten-dollar bills Tucked in snakeskin boots Darling, don?t be difficult; You ain?t yet seventeen. Since I?m gonna die young; Least I?ll have lived your dream. Why you?d want to be promised. To a wealthy town man; Instead of life on Mars, In a rock n? roll band. Good times and bad times Lock them in your drawer Use it or lose it, ?cause You always want more You?ll never be Lonely in America No, no, I?ll never be Lonely in America I won?t be Lonely in America Perhaps they?ll string me up by, Some Wichita crossroad. Or I?ll drift by down the Wrong end of Melrose. Love, lost, no lawyers concern, My broken home keeps him, Living like a prince, yeah, Life?s got nothing on me. Good times and bad times Lock them in your drawer Use it or lose it, ?cause You always want more Won?t ever be Lonely in America No, no, I?ll never be Lonely in America I won?t be Lonely in America SOLO CHORUS Title: Re: So I wrote these lyrix yyh. Post by: highway C on June 25, 2007, 01:33:33 AM sounds like your trying to write something thats similar to AFD
lyrics are okay , theme , not so much Title: Re: So I wrote these lyrix yyh. Post by: gnrfanxxx on June 26, 2007, 02:30:41 PM i like it : ok:
Title: Re: So I wrote these lyrix yyh. Post by: Kady.52 on June 26, 2007, 03:22:08 PM ^ :beer: cheers. I'm not sayin it's meant to be a deep, meaningful song or anythin, its jst good,clean fun. :yes:
Title: Re: So I wrote these lyrix yyh. Post by: Verasa on June 26, 2007, 05:13:36 PM it's cool man...do what you do and do it to the best of your ability. got a .MP3???
Title: Re: So I wrote these lyrix yyh. Post by: Kady.52 on June 26, 2007, 06:06:02 PM cheers man.
no not for that one, but I got one for a diffrent song here: www.myspace.com/vanittivendetta :smoking: Title: Re: So I wrote these lyrix yyh. Post by: Verasa on June 26, 2007, 09:20:17 PM ^ :beer: Oh yeah... you guys are good.. the guitarist has got some chops : ok:
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