Here Today... Gone To Hell!

there not much to you professionals but to me there speical
i got thrashed over them ,im open for suggestions
i tried to play a bit abstract , so here ya go please comment thx
Updated links:

http://download.yousendit.com/605D3FED29961D9A     -used a untuned guitar

http://download.yousendit.com/F35C43CB292B233C    - this one is better

anyone :S?

I like that second one. Relaxing...

Thankyou. :D
That was nice , its mainly a subtle mellow recording , unfortunately i was badly bashed for it on another forum
for reasons i cant see

Here's some advice.

I am downloading the songs now but Im gonna give u some advice that will take u a long way.


FUCK Negative people and what they say.

U have to consider also where u posted your songs.

If I posted my songs on a Pantera forum, They would be ripped on and I'd be told I was complete shit. Hell its happened here and there on this forum.

Develop thick skin cause there are gonna be people who hate u regardless of your talent or skill level.

Their are people who think GNR sucks and that Axl is the worst singer on the planet. If they can be criticized and hated everyone can and will be.

So Ignore and try not to let it get u down or hurt u when people bash u.

Some people will honestly not like u but there are some who are "COVER" musicians who think learning a bunch of tabs from other people make them a great musician *Which is doesnt* and they hate on people who have the balls to try and make their own path instead of playing someone elses.

I had a guy trash my song "welcome To Reality" and he posted a recording and guess what it was?  "Glycerine" By Bush.

I almost laughed myself into a Coma. that dude trashed my original song and he has the balls to put up a shitty Bush cover that I could teach my 5 year old niece to play on guitar............ So u gotta overlook some people and don't let them get in the way of your dream.

thankyou ,
yeah i know , im only 16 and and im developing
giving up isnt really an opstion cuz this what i want to do and the years before me to gain mre experence are long.
what did u think of my recordings?

I like the music.

I am not a huge instrumental fan so once u write and record some vocals over it I think it really has potential to be good.

It definitely has that abstract feel to it.

Thankyou
yeah im trying to mix buckethead kind guitars (electric tears) into a songs like that and do vocals , the 2nd one
is goin to be a song im calling "never had it"

ofcource these type songs will be only 3 out of 13 for the album
thankyou for taking our time :D!

Dude yknow those don't sound bad at all. Actually that's pretty similar to what i'm doing now, instrumental stuff, which is also influenced by 'colma' / 'electric tears' albums, and some of Bumblefoot's earlier stuff as well. Keep up the good work.

Ty , that means alot
on mygnrforum.com
i got TRASHED , poeple kept telling me it sucks , im not good etc , load of assholes there
guess its cuz im not doing covers  , having the balls they dont , to do something diffrent and abstract

anyways ty again for your comment , means alot..

files expired  :( I wanted to listen to them

hold on ill put new links

new links uploaded.

like I said before some sloppiness .. but 'cos you've only played 9months and these are your own songs I would say they're great.. just practise and they'll be awesome

thankyou very much. will do : ok:

I liked "Peace".

It could be better, yes, but is good...

thankyou ,
there boith peace's though lol , was it the 2nd one u liked or the first 1?(peace 3 , peace 6)