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Title: A song I'm working on - feedback appreciated Post by: EstrangedReality on January 20, 2007, 01:02:53 AM I started scribbling lyrics because I wasn't particularly involved in anything, and this is how they turned out:
I STARTED THIS FOR A PURPOSE And now it all seems the same to me Blurring the lines of distinction I did not want it to end this way I used to think you would be different I thought you meant that much to me But as the years have passed us by I'm still left standing Standing in place I realize now these things cannot be mended They do not heal or change I was put here for a reason Not just another mindless slave That's what I keep telling myself Even as my soul is beaten By the shards of you that were taken away Drained like I never imagined Used in so many ways Abused by the only pieces left of me, I never thought this would be. I look up to the heavens for an answer but they continue to rain the crimson Spilling from your soul. My mind has broken far apart Severed at the core I take a look inside myself For the answers to what I am here for. The memories come back to me It stings like you wouldn't, Like you couldn't believe. I remember you in pieces pieces of what you could be I can see your face look up at me Crystallized and frozen in space I reach out for your hand at last And this is when it stops And I'm left here again At the pit where this torture was conceived. Splinters bury themselves deep inside My weakened state I try to find the reason But this time I'm afraid it's too late. Any thoughts, comments, etc. would be appreciated as always. :) |