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Title: what happened to Axl's ability to write catchy choruses?
Post by: nonlinear on November 23, 2006, 04:09:46 PM
I just listened to OMG for the first time in about a year, and as I was listening I realized how bad the chorus to the song sucked.  the choruses to all of the new leaks suck as well, and are definately the parts of the songs that are going to limit their popularity.  Axl used to write such catchy choruses - most of the choruses on AFD, Lies, and UYI were great.

And the verses are still really good, it's just the choruses.  WTF happened?



Title: Re: what happened to Axl's ability to write catchy choruses?
Post by: axl2 on November 23, 2006, 04:11:04 PM
I just listened to OMG for the first time in about a year, and as I was listening I realized how bad the chorus to the song sucked.  the choruses to all of the new leaks suck as well, and are definately the parts of the songs that are going to limit their popularity.  Axl used to write such catchy choruses - most of the choruses on AFD, Lies, and UYI were great.

And the verses are still really good, it's just the choruses.  WTF happened?



Its just song structure differential.


Title: Re: what happened to Axl's ability to write catchy choruses?
Post by: nonlinear on November 23, 2006, 04:12:01 PM
no, it's not that.  the songs still have choruses, they just suck.


Title: Re: what happened to Axl's ability to write catchy choruses?
Post by: Where is Hassan Nasrallah ? on November 23, 2006, 04:12:08 PM
i dont know if "sucks" is the word
but yeah, choruses are not what is building the songs i guess, from what he heard

madagascar / twat have a very unique construction model. amazing.


Title: Re: what happened to Axl's ability to write catchy choruses?
Post by: benchiefjr on November 23, 2006, 04:12:42 PM
there aren't really choruses as far as i'm concerned...these songs are so different as far as structure is concerned.


Title: Re: what happened to Axl's ability to write catchy choruses?
Post by: Demon Wolf on November 23, 2006, 04:13:17 PM
Exactly. And let's not put down his ability before we heard the whole album.


Title: Re: what happened to Axl's ability to write catchy choruses?
Post by: Where is Hassan Nasrallah ? on November 23, 2006, 04:15:19 PM
but he has a point on the catchy choruses. i dont know if it's good or bad.

better is pretty catchy. in an annoying way. i can smell cellphone ringtones already :)


Title: Re: what happened to Axl's ability to write catchy choruses?
Post by: jarmo on November 23, 2006, 04:15:27 PM
Bohemian Rhapsody doesn't have a "catchy chorus". It still is an amazing track...




/jarmo


Title: Re: what happened to Axl's ability to write catchy choruses?
Post by: Wando on November 23, 2006, 04:17:06 PM
IRS has a lot of potential to become new PC, it just needs more power. TWAT has a pretty catchy chorus IMO as well as Better..


Title: Re: what happened to Axl's ability to write catchy choruses?
Post by: marty on November 23, 2006, 04:18:02 PM
Bohemian Rhapsody doesn't have a "catchy chorus". It still is an amazing track...




/jarmo
you've gta admit the man has a point there!


Title: Re: what happened to Axl's ability to write catchy choruses?
Post by: Demon Wolf on November 23, 2006, 04:18:28 PM
I agree. If only the guitars are more upfront in the studio version of IRS (like they are in the live version), the chorus is catchy like hell.

Gonna call the President! YEAH!


Title: Re: what happened to Axl's ability to write catchy choruses?
Post by: Nytunz on November 23, 2006, 04:18:41 PM
i notice that a catchy choruse makes u earlier tierd of the song.
I wont say Better has a catchy choruse either. Not Estranged, Not Coma.. But they are still masterworks!

Catchy choruses can work, but the main flow in a song, and the whole setting is the important thing.


Title: Re: what happened to Axl's ability to write catchy choruses?
Post by: nonlinear on November 23, 2006, 04:19:00 PM
there aren't really choruses as far as i'm concerned...these songs are so different as far as structure is concerned.

argh...  what do you mean 'there aren't really choruses.'  do you know what a chorus (aka. refrain) is???  It's not defined by how good it sounds, and a chorus doens't have to be 'catchy,' which is how you guys seem to define it.  it's funny how you all jock axl so much and excuse the shitty choruses by saying "hey man, they're not choruses, they're just structured differently."  that's total BS.



Title: Re: what happened to Axl's ability to write catchy choruses?
Post by: Demon Wolf on November 23, 2006, 04:20:44 PM
And besides, musicians don't usually have to "lose" any ability.  They just evolve, and sometimes it's for the worse... and sometimes it's for the Better.  :hihi:


Title: Re: what happened to Axl's ability to write catchy choruses?
Post by: nonlinear on November 23, 2006, 04:21:04 PM
Bohemian Rhapsody doesn't have a "catchy chorus". It still is an amazing track...




/jarmo

But jarmo, Bohemian Rhapsody doesn't have a chorus at all.  I'm not saying a song requires a chorus to be good (stairway to heaven another example), but if the song does have a chorus it should be the hook of the song.


Title: Re: what happened to Axl's ability to write catchy choruses?
Post by: benchiefjr on November 23, 2006, 04:21:34 PM
there aren't really choruses as far as i'm concerned...these songs are so different as far as structure is concerned.

argh...  what do you mean 'there aren't really choruses.'  do you know what a chorus (aka. refrain) is???  It's not defined by how good it sounds, and a chorus doens't have to be 'catchy,' which is how you guys seem to define it.  it's funny how you all jock axl so much and excuse the shitty choruses by saying "hey man, they're not choruses, they're just structured differently."  that's total BS.


I mean...any Chevelle song i hear, you know what the chorus is, its very formulaic.  These songs don't have THAT traditional radio rock structure.


Title: Re: what happened to Axl's ability to write catchy choruses?
Post by: nonlinear on November 23, 2006, 04:22:58 PM
i notice that a catchy choruse makes u earlier tierd of the song.
I wont say Better has a catchy choruse either. Not Estranged, Not Coma.. But they are still masterworks!

Catchy choruses can work, but the main flow in a song, and the whole setting is the important thing.

And again, Coma and Estranged don't have choruses!!!!  do you guys know what a chorus even is?


Title: Re: what happened to Axl's ability to write catchy choruses?
Post by: jarmo on November 23, 2006, 04:23:46 PM
The songs are what they are.

I don't think they should add catchy choruses to them just to make people like you happy.



Coma has no chorus either.

I guess something happened to Axl's ability in 1991 then?

You're basing this on a few songs, why not base everything on one song released in 1991 and say he "lost his ability" back then? Ridiculous speculation.



/jarmo


Title: Re: what happened to Axl's ability to write catchy choruses?
Post by: dave-gnfnr2k on November 23, 2006, 04:24:49 PM
Most of gnrs best songs dont have a catchy chorus, only radio pop songs really have them. Estranged, Coma, And Nov rain three of gnrs best ever are not catchy. Btw better is catchy with the no one ever told me I was alone part. CD the song when all i got is precious time is catchy, so they do have some catchy songs that we hvae heard so far


Title: Re: what happened to Axl's ability to write catchy choruses?
Post by: Demon Wolf on November 23, 2006, 04:25:02 PM
It's not like every song has to have a chorus. Some songs just do better without them.


Title: Re: what happened to Axl's ability to write catchy choruses?
Post by: Nytunz on November 23, 2006, 04:26:12 PM
i notice that a catchy choruse makes u earlier tierd of the song.
I wont say Better has a catchy choruse either. Not Estranged, Not Coma.. But they are still masterworks!

Catchy choruses can work, but the main flow in a song, and the whole setting is the important thing.

And again, Coma and Estranged don't have choruses!!!!? do you guys know what a chorus even is?

i would say thay have.. just because they dont sound the same, because Axl sings different some instruments are playing the same way
and i concider that a chorus.
Just because they dont sound poppy, there can be a chorus in a song.


Title: Re: what happened to Axl's ability to write catchy choruses?
Post by: mdttkk on November 23, 2006, 04:26:52 PM
just because you think it sucks doesnt mean it actually does


Title: Re: what happened to Axl's ability to write catchy choruses?
Post by: The Hinge on November 23, 2006, 04:27:24 PM
Perhaps wait until you hear the new album before making such a ..........comment


Title: Re: what happened to Axl's ability to write catchy choruses?
Post by: Demon Wolf on November 23, 2006, 04:28:23 PM
And it can't be worse, if it's better.

A friend of mine said that once. So true.


Title: Re: what happened to Axl's ability to write catchy choruses?
Post by: ppbebe on November 23, 2006, 04:42:13 PM
"Oh my god I can?t deny this"? I love every bit of the song.

What is the typical catchy chorus like? Like born in the USA oh oh?
Maybe I don't like catchy choruses.  :-\


Title: Re: what happened to Axl's ability to write catchy choruses?
Post by: Lethalis on November 23, 2006, 04:45:12 PM
I just listened to OMG for the first time in about a year, and as I was listening I realized how bad the chorus to the song sucked.  the choruses to all of the new leaks suck as well, and are definately the parts of the songs that are going to limit their popularity.  Axl used to write such catchy choruses - most of the choruses on AFD, Lies, and UYI were great.

And the verses are still really good, it's just the choruses.  WTF happened?
Izzy left.

When you listen to Izzy's music you also miss Axl's verses (sometimes).


Title: Re: what happened to Axl's ability to write catchy choruses?
Post by: nonlinear on November 23, 2006, 04:48:31 PM
The songs are what they are.

I don't think they should add catchy choruses to them just to make people like you happy.



Coma has no chorus either.

I guess something happened to Axl's ability in 1991 then?

You're basing this on a few songs, why not base everything on one song released in 1991 and say he "lost his ability" back then? Ridiculous speculation.



/jarmo

Jarmo, I'm not saying that the songs need choruses.  There are many great songs by many artists that don't have choruses.  what i'm trying to say is that in those songs that have choruses, they are nowhere near as good as the old choruses.  that's all.


Title: Re: what happened to Axl's ability to write catchy choruses?
Post by: JimMorrison4 on November 23, 2006, 05:15:31 PM
Anytime I listen to Better, I have the chorus stuck in my head. IRS has a catchy chorus. The other songs aren't really radio-friendly, so a typical hook-chorus isn't necessary.


Title: Re: what happened to Axl's ability to write catchy choruses?
Post by: sisterofyu on November 23, 2006, 08:45:13 PM
The Best Thing about AXL besides his Fantasic deep toned singing voice and sweet twang that thrills me is his remarkable play on words, Im thrilled to suggest that Axl writes as poetic as Jim Morrison and as political as John Lennon, keekee.....those are the only traits Axl has that I like.... :D


Title: Re: what happened to Axl's ability to write catchy choruses?
Post by: TheMole on November 24, 2006, 06:11:33 AM
Argh! What a display of ignorance! I mean, come friggin' on... The guy (nonlinear) has a very good point, and is very good at explaining it, yet some people seem to filter out everything that actually makes any sense on this forum.

Let me try to summarize:

        1. Not all songs need choruses.
        2. Not all great old GNR songs have choruses (NR, Coma, ...).
        3. Some great old GNR songs have great choruses (PC, SCOM, Don't Cry, ...)
        4. Better, TWAT and IRS all have choruses, so does OMG.
        5. In all of the above songs (except OMG), the verses are very good, of exceptional quality.
        6. In Better, TWAT and IRS, the choruses are not very catchy, nor very good.
        7. A catchy chorus is not necessarily a good chorus (OMG, for instance).

Please note that some of the above mentioned statements are of course my opinion, and there's no accounting for taste. But, please, try to discuss the points that the man is actually trying to make instead of missing the point completely and using the "differently structured", "we don't need choruses", "choruses make a song sound poppy" arguments to counter his (or my) opinion about the choruses (which are, in fact, very much present) in the new songs.


Title: Re: what happened to Axl's ability to write catchy choruses?
Post by: nonlinear on November 24, 2006, 01:01:08 PM
Argh! What a display of ignorance! I mean, come friggin' on... The guy (nonlinear) has a very good point, and is very good at explaining it, yet some people seem to filter out everything that actually makes any sense on this forum.

Let me try to summarize:

        1. Not all songs need choruses.
        2. Not all great old GNR songs have choruses (NR, Coma, ...).
        3. Some great old GNR songs have great choruses (PC, SCOM, Don't Cry, ...)
        4. Better, TWAT and IRS all have choruses, so does OMG.
        5. In all of the above songs (except OMG), the verses are very good, of exceptional quality.
        6. In Better, TWAT and IRS, the choruses are not very catchy, nor very good.
        7. A catchy chorus is not necessarily a good chorus (OMG, for instance).

Please note that some of the above mentioned statements are of course my opinion, and there's no accounting for taste. But, please, try to discuss the points that the man is actually trying to make instead of missing the point completely and using the "differently structured", "we don't need choruses", "choruses make a song sound poppy" arguments to counter his (or my) opinion about the choruses (which are, in fact, very much present) in the new songs.

Halle-fuckin-luiah!  Finally someone with some damn sense on this board!  thanks for aggregating and clarifying the points : ok :


Title: Re: what happened to Axl's ability to write catchy choruses?
Post by: Hysteron on November 24, 2006, 03:34:43 PM
It has to be pointed out that no one here has heard the album yet.


Title: Re: what happened to Axl's ability to write catchy choruses?
Post by: Amanda. on November 25, 2006, 05:02:21 AM
well isn't it obvious that good ideas must have an end sometime?  ;)


Title: Re: what happened to Axl's ability to write catchy choruses?
Post by: J.J. Cook on November 25, 2006, 02:14:54 PM
Yeah the chorus' aren't that good I suppose. They're ok but they're no paradise city style. In better I don't even know what the chorus is. Is it that "No one ever told me...." part or the "all that I wanted was...." part? But I actually think the Oh My God chorus is pretty good , but a little muddy. The verses to that song really blow though.