Title: lyrics, opinions wanted.? Post by: AUSTRALIAN_TSUNAMI on August 10, 2006, 01:02:07 AM Standing at the edge of this limitless ocean
Struck down by the wonder that I see, Watching as the time passes you by Looking for the answers, waiting for the sign Maybe it?s a waste of time; maybe it?s the journey that was meant for me Maybe this was meant to be I?m just a prisoner of my own mind Seemingly Trapped form what I?m sure No bridge could cover these seas No boat could stand these stormy seas A prisoner on my private island With just this fire to keep me warm But such a lonely home Seemingly no way home A pointless hope I hear their voices; it?s a strange sensation It?s a scary time, there the ghosts I find The demons that hold my hand Walk me into the storm Watching as the lighting cracks over the shore Standing thinking this can?t be all I?m just looking for a friendly hand Where?s the halo saving this man Looking for a peace of mind, a place to rest my eyes Someone to share Wish you were here, a friendly hand It?s not the way I?d pictured it?d be This wasn?t meant to be; no, no not for me It?s this land it corrupts the man No, no, it?s not for me It?s not the way I?d pictured It?s not the way home It Corrupts the man Title: Re: lyrics, opinions wanted.? Post by: Shirell on August 10, 2006, 03:17:48 AM Honestly, not bad at all. Got a melody?
Title: Re: lyrics, opinions wanted.? Post by: AUSTRALIAN_TSUNAMI on August 10, 2006, 09:03:12 PM Honestly, not bad at all.? Got a melody? you know i do ;) lol. Title: Re: lyrics, opinions wanted.? Post by: Shirell on August 11, 2006, 11:29:01 AM Can I hear it? :yes:
Title: Re: lyrics, opinions wanted.? Post by: Mom on August 11, 2006, 04:09:02 PM Pretty good, I'd be curious to hear it as well. Very, very Estrangedesque.
Title: Re: lyrics, opinions wanted.? Post by: MCT on August 11, 2006, 04:24:27 PM Cliche and angst-ridden...
...good for you! That's where it all starts... :yes: Title: Re: lyrics, opinions wanted.? Post by: sucker punch on August 12, 2006, 06:57:14 PM coool
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